Reviews for Beneath Two Moons
SpidermanFan1 chapter 10 . 8h
so close to being finshed
PeytonSilver chapter 10 . 12/10/2011
I just discovered this story...10 years too late? Quite sad that the final chapter was never posted though...I hope one day you'll revisit this to give us an ending!
Deathdingle chapter 10 . 11/4/2007
quite the story, I have to say I've enjoyed reading it thus far, I have noticed a few incosistancies with information from hte actual series as I've been re-watching it myself for my own writing but hey, just have to be more careful in future. other little note is spelling errors and gramma errors, if you're interested I'd like to offer to proof read further chapters, and if there are any of your other series, current or future that you'd like me to do the same for just PM and I'll give you a list of animes that I've seen the full series for and will happily proof read.

Can't wait for the next one

Regards

Deathdingle
Lucybye chapter 10 . 8/13/2007
Did you drop dead or something? It's been years! are you ever gonna update again?
Inda chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Oh well I know it's been a long while but I just have to get this off my chest. Sorry you feel you couldn't write anymore. It's a shame a real shame. Hope in the near future you might finish that. it would be a site. Thanks for what ou gave us it was awesome.
Snwy.Leopard chapter 10 . 9/18/2005
Oh, i wish you hadn't lost the drive to continue this story...but i totally understand 'casue that's how i am with my fanfictions (unfortunately). Is there any chance at all you would be able to finish this story? It's really good and i really hope you do (in the end) update this.
blackwisteria chapter 10 . 9/6/2005
OMG

"Yes, I've become the delinquent fanfic author that everyone hates. I'm on a bit of a hiatus from fanfiction, if you haven't noticed. I've lost all drive to finish "Beneath Two Moons" or write any new fics that aren't original. Sorry. "

You must be kidding me... *cries*

but anyway, your not a delinquent author that everyone hates. *sighs* I really hope that you would finish "Beneath Two Moons" I've been really expecting it for the past three years, and now that I think of it, It's the first time I reviewed -_-;; Anyway, please, please continue it, at least finish the wedding chapter, I would really love it if you did so.
mysisterisasquijum chapter 10 . 8/6/2005
im sorry to bother you after two years (but not really) i just finished reading ur fanfic and was wondering where the wedding chapter and the rest of the story is.

i would love it if ud continue with this story.
Raen Shadows chapter 10 . 11/7/2003
Adicted...fic...update! Please update! This is AWESOME! keep up the great work! Hey just outta curiosity did you know that you aren't accepting unsigned reviews? Just wanted to let ya know.

Storm_warrior_91
elf-princess4 chapter 10 . 10/30/2003
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Cev chapter 10 . 7/13/2003
I've had time to certainly think about what I was going to say when I reviewed! (I was thinking about it all throughout reading the chapters you have up, and let me tell you, it was not such an easy task!) Your way of writing is not meek, but gentle, and although there certainly is drama (ex: the poisoning), you present the story in a realistic, easing way that really I've never come across before, which was why I love it so much and I'm so keen to read more!

The way you've brought Hitomi's and Van's relationship together with astounding ease, respectibility (besides the ever-pleasing short moment of citrus!), and you've presented it so that it really is a form of REAL love, not some idealistic surrealist outlook with the pair, is outstanding. It's comforting to know that I've come to read such a wonderful view of their relationship, and I do believe that it has finally allowed me to see my own Esca fanfic in a different light, and steer it toward a different direction later on (something I needed to do, I'm thanking you for it!).

Although the story revolves around Van and Hitomi, it is also directing its attention to the troubles of the other characters' dire issues(Celena and Merle), and come to terms of how the actual PEOPLE of Fanelia have felt, too, something that most Escaflowne fanfics hardly ever include. I love how you've made Van's character out to be, too, he's so KawAI! _

It is a very sweet and meaningful story. Please continue.

P.S. So Hitomi's NOT a virgin anymore? (just curious, I mean...you didn't blatantly reveal that, I'm just prodding around for more lemonade...you're not the only pervert! ;P)

P.S.S. CHICKENS!
Revan's Raven chapter 10 . 7/9/2003
You did an amazing job on this story.I know I've said this at least twice by now, but you are a very talented writer who puts alot of effort into her work. I hope you will be able to update soon. You have no idea how much it drives me crazy to read a story with no ending yet.

Vegetables? Lol. That was funny. You think up some amazing things. Keep it up.
Taraka Dasmascus chapter 10 . 7/8/2003
-Blinks- "Chicken?... um.. !...Hm Chicken" -Drool-

-Shakes head mentaly Slapping Her Self-

"hehe, Sorry Bout That, Any Ways...I Luf The Fic!" -Ovodes the Glares Of some people- "um... o.O; Im very much Sure That Some People think im a lesbiean now O.O But im not D... Just ask my BoyFriend..."-Few People SweatDrop- "Any ways You Must Right more ! No Flames From me I Obsolutly Love This " -Finds her Self Thinking about Chickens...- "Did YOU HAVE TO MENTION CHICKEN ! REALLY ! " -Mumbles something unhearable-

hehehe Any ways Tootles ! Buy the way I love you Site to D
link no miko chapter 10 . 6/17/2003
*can't stop laughing* Dear...why didn't you...*gasp* tell me there was a new...chapter? *guffaw* But it was well worth it. I loved the parallelism between Van thinking that talking about your love life was something only for lovers, and Hitomi blurting all to Millerna. And the food fight was great! "It's us against them!" made me burst out laughing, as well as the "I'll never look at vegetables quite the same way" line.

Van's and Meruru's feelings at their "reunion" were very good. And her feelings before then, how she was all worried like that. Celena is right though, Van could never hate her.

A great chapter, hun. Oh, how did you do on your English paper? I hope you got a good grade, and that your problems are getting better. *huggles* Much loves to ya, hun.

Thanks for the new chapter!
ShadowsintheDark chapter 10 . 6/15/2003
Oh my gosh! This is one of the best stories ive read! I love how you've captures the true essance of a realistic relationship even though its quite "Out of this world" .; Im sad that the next chapter will be the last, but im really looking foreward to it. Im also curious on who is all comming to the wedding, *glances at Hitomi's family and friends on earth* o..i can't wait! Well ill eagerly be awaiting the last chapter _ and great job on everything!
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