hi love this story and Breakfast at Tiffney's. I know Audrey Hepburn has passed on but can you do an update and have holly meet her granddaughter. I know you will probably never see this but if you do think about it thank you for your time.

this is beautiful and so so sad

Wonderful story! Just watched the movie for the second time this week...shame Holly couldn't just stay in one place...

Hey, I know this was published ages ago, but I just read it. It's an interesting take on how the story continued, it seems realistic and something that would probably happen, and that's true to the movie and kind of sad.

While there are some rough spots with the verbs (the verb times do not seem to always flow), it's generally well written.

Thanks for writing it and letting us read it.

Please come back Holly! That was very good, emotional

lovely just lovely!

This is great. I love your writing. FT

I LOVED it so much you should write a sequal to this please:D

i love audrey hepburn and her movies and this is a very well exacuted version of what could happen. please write more you are very good at it. keep up the good work.

I thought this was story.

very very interesting. i like it.

That moved me to tears. I always knew it wouldn't be happily ever after for them.

That was very good, you touched on all of the obvious points, but why don't you dig a little deeper

Loved the story. The movie is great and you have really written a truly marvelous story of what could had happened after the movie ended...:)

this was good. pretty impressed anyone could write a decent fic about this movie, i dont know why, just seemed odd. but u did a good job, keep writing :D