Apart from those things I mentioned in my comments, this is an Excellent story !

WELL DONE XXXXXXX

I thought they call their daughter Victoria?

She is meant to give birth to the placenta! Otherwise it's dangerous for the mother

How can harry cast that last spell on the dark lord if HARRY doesn't have a wand to use and isn't using a wand?

Surely it would have been Severus who saved her and not harry since Severus is her husband and Harry is just a friend !

Why didn't use use the medallion to get back to Severus? It's charmed anti theft charm on it

Hope Severus manages to make it back for the birth of his child ?

Ginny is pregnant too?

How can she drop to her knees so easily while PREGNANT?

Even if the charm was true hermione had sex raped off hogwarts so the charm would work on hermione

I thought they were not going to publish their relationship or marriage or the baby until AFTER the holidays ?

Her rape memory came back on her wedding night OUCH way to kill the honeymoon!

In chapter 13 did Severus stay standing on his socks I thought thought the whole point of they touch the earth was the whole point of not wearing anything under the clothes even shoes and socks ? Also won't everyone see hermione and Severus getting married if they are in the front garden? Can't they go into the back hidden garden instead ?

And trying the ring on before wedding day on Wedding day ! Oh my god

Isn't it bad luck for the groom to see the bride before the wedding and or the bride to see the groom before the before the wedding? As muggleborn she should know that !