PLEASE UPDATE!PLEASE UPDATE!PLEASE UPDATE!

I'd like to ask when you plan to return to this fiction cause I seriously miss it. Don't get me wrong I absolutely love An Arc to the Past, but I really miss this fic, I know you haven't abandoned it but it's already been a year.

On a side note have you ever thought of making a Boku no hero fanfiction. I'd really like to see what you would come up with.

Please update

I remember when I first read this story through and I thought that it was a pretty good story.

But now that I look at it now... I don't see the appeal anymore.

I cringe each time I read most of the chapters because it just seems like the author has a MASSIVE hard-on for Naruto. The world revolves around him and he is made out to be the most 'perfect' person to ever exist. It just seems like too much dick stroking to me.

Top it off with the obvious grammical errors, cheesy one-liners, and glaring Jojo references... It just seems like the author just wants to placate to one specific group of people: Hardcore Jojo/Naruto fanboys and fangirls.

You have to give the main characters flaws if you want them to be relatable in some way. Sure, one might enjoy the constant badassery that happens in every chapter, but, other people might find it to be really tasteless.

Let's not forget to mention the weird switching between english and japanese language transitions. You either use the suffix's only or not at all, otherwise, you'll just come off as a weeb. No one likes weebs. And the only way that would work is if they were speaking to someone who wasn't of their language group.

It doesn't make sense for japanese people that are in Japan to randomly switch between english and their native tongue every few sentences. Same goes for any other culture.

And please, for the love of God, STOP inserting yourself into the story mid-chapter. It's dumb. No self -respecting author would so such a thing, it's too self-pandering and makes you come off as a crazy person.

That Sakura is not in the harem please
You will put thease animes
Tokyo Ghoul
Nanatsu No Taizai
Shingeki No Kyojin
Shokugeki no Souma
Kuroinu(is hentai)
Highschool DXD
Fate(Stay Night/Unlimited Blade Works/Heven's Feels\Kaleid\Grand Order

Thanks you for this fic

Please put update chapter 17 for me?.

Never mind in an idiot. I read it wrong

Should've done krav maga. Its considered one of the most deadly fighting styles in the world.

Did you mean to say azuki's boo like a part name or azuki's bae?

Please proceed to the next chapter. I want to see what happens next.

I love it you made the romance and character development more realistic than canon which isn't very hard to do but still I love it when authors put effort into characters

Chacha and naruto are a match made in heaven

I was surprised to see you mention The Bouncer, it was one of a few dozen games I liked from the PS2 era, which thankfully I actually own a copy of said game, I will admit that Dauragon was a hard bastard to face even after having Sion, Kou and Volt sorta maxed after a few playthroughs

Great story but some parts are ok and slow paced. But that is good. That leaves stopping points for readers. Though you have to make it well enough to have them come back quickly.

Please, add the next chapter please