| Reviews for Wild Wolf |
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SlyMonster chapter 7 . 1h Ok this is where I stop reading this story. You are really dead set on increasing the power of the bad guys at the price of destroying what makes them interesting in the first place. First, the white walkers talks ... What was really fascinating in them is the cold monstrosity, never talking, never doing anything outside their goals. A cold monster that tirelessly tries to snuff out life. You not only give them the ability to talk but also to scheme among themselves but also with humans, create homunculus and plans. This outright destroyed their image as monsters to bring them to the level of humans... I hated this, but I accepted it. Next, we had joffrey, Joffrey is only interesting because of his sadism, arrogance, and idiocy. You make him a scheming hypocrite. The only purpose of this character was to act like a foolish monster with a funny ending. you just made a Petyr n2. That is the second villain you destroyed. Cersei, the shortsighted villain became a nice character. Even if you make her evil later, you already destroyed her character. Third destroyed character. Varys, a major player of the game of throne was seemingly not deemed important enough to see any screen time. Fourth destroyed character. Ned single pursuit of honor was a real kick. A tragic character destined to die for his honor in the hand of the idiotic and childish joffrey learned of the true parentage of the queen's children and waited, and he waited ... and he is still waiting for who knows what before acting honorably. Fifth destroyed character. And then the double destruction of Viserys and Daenerys. Him, the mad and arrogant beggar king became impervious to fire and have a dragon... And her, previously Aegon reborn became a beaten up girl and lost a dragon. That's seven. As for Ranma, never in my life, I have seen such a foolish character. The guy is invisible, but he passes his time hurling rocks. This is so ridiculous... Add to that the guy is as dumb as a rock with knowledge of the white walkers and how dangerous his situation is, yet passes his time telling stories and training kids. Congratulation you created the dumbest character ever. The only good character is baelish. |
SlyMonster chapter 5 . 10/30 First, you really have an issue with Fenris size, sometimes he is as big as poney, and next, he is "almost as big as a poney" and now, he seems to not grow anymore, one-year-old dogs should already be pretty close to their maximum size... Also, your joffrey is so smart that you took what truly made that character interesting. He is constantly weighing thinking about strategies and scapegoat ... What was really interesting in the original was how arrogant and idiotic he was. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28 chutiya novel |
Argonautt chapter 4 . 10/28 Yes! finaly somone who understands the pain of seeing Mpreg and just walking away from it haha |
SlyMonster chapter 1 . 10/27 A male kunoichi ? I am not sure you understand the meaning of "kunoichi"... |
the water omega chapter 21 . 10/10 I wounder if you would write an omake, if only to how you would write cat's reaction to arya's engagement. |
Druto chapter 1 . 10/6 Wewh what a length great start |
Centaurious chapter 21 . 9/19 This was one hell of an epic. Just the fact that you finished this story deserves praise, that it tells a good, believable story almost beggars belief. The number of story arcs and important characters that you kept track of is incredible. Only one important subplot was left hanging and that is the Faceless Man after Arya which could be handled in a side story later on. Congratulation on your Epic! |
Lifelessman chapter 12 . 9/18 Good Work...! 12 |
Lifelessman chapter 11 . 9/16 Good Work...! 11 |
Lifelessman chapter 10 . 9/16 Good Work...! 10 |
Lifelessman chapter 9 . 9/16 Good Work...! 9 |
Lifelessman chapter 7 . 9/16 Good Work...! 7 |
Lifelessman chapter 6 . 9/16 Good Work...! 6 |
Lifelessman chapter 5 . 9/16 Good Work...! 5 |