I wish the real writer see that both of them have a potential, it still hurt to see Neal died and Emma with a pirate...and here I am nursing my broken heart with fanfic of them happily ever after and wishing it could be true. But because someone have to open her big mouth it just have to end with a disaster (even if it becomes famous world wide) I just don't see a truly happily ever after with the show, just some twisted and force happy ending...
Anyway I hope too see more of your story, that I come to love so much...and good luck

Well done. Loved this.

This could have been tenser

Bless. Everything Emma said to Hook and the things she found out about him was everything I wanted on the show. Also, if you change for someone else, that's not true change. It's always going to be temporal. If you change because others' behavior inspires you, that's different. Hook's behavior, though, and his changes have always been conditional on the knowledge that he can 'get' Emma by behaving a certain way. And, that means without her, he would revert. That's nonsense. Good job. I really recognized Emma here whereas I haven't the faintest idea who most of the people on the show are right now.

You trully did justice to this couple than the real writers ever did
I trully love the outcome of this story
You make that both of them finally forgave each other and move on from the past
This is truly a die for
Beside another author story
This is definetly enter my favorite story :)

#sorry for some of the spelling

wow, that was great! It was so well written that in between reading I almost forgot it wasn't part of the show, confusing everyone I talk to about Once.

Awww! This was such a wonderful story! It has helped to mend my broken heart after Quiet Minds. Thank you so much, DSB!

Such a good start! The conversation between Emma and Henry is heartbreaking but necessary. This is really what should have happened... Can't wait to read more!

That's so sweet.

Sad to see this end. Well done!

I love your story!

Awww this was so sweet! Thank you so much for this story! If only the writers had given them the happiness they deserved...But thank you for giving it to them. I'm jumping on your new fic right away. :D Can't say anything more than thank you! Hope you continue to write such masterpieces.

Thanks for this! It was a beautiful story and made me feel better after the shows disappointment!

EEEeeekkk! the feels! The feels! This was so good! AAAHHHHHHHH! :D

Very lovely! Thanks so much, I've enjoyed this story immensely.