Are you planning on ever finishing this? Because I certainly hope so.

lol. That was a funny little scene between Hiei and Kurama. I liked it though. That last line was the best. What's going to happen next?

Okay not what I was expecting but I'll keep going with it for now.

I love your choice of parallels here. Kenshin and Kurama are both redheads, but their roles are reversed and I'm thinking sexually as well as the summoned/sacrifice.

Your details are vivid and provide just the right amount to make each scene come alive. So far, this fic has less characters than the others (just 4-6 if Soujiro and Saitou are included-opposed to Gmen's much more numerous cast) so each character gets a lot of attention.

Looking forward to more!

I love this story!

another great story, more updates?

I checked out your profile, and this story was listed under "up to a month from being updated". What's up with this February 2003 crap? Update! I want to see (or read the detailed description of) Hiei's face when he wakes up and realizes that Kurama "took advantage of his unconsciousness" AKA gave him a bath. I want to know how Sano is going to find Kenshin in a big city full of hiding places, especially when Kenshin doesn't want to be found. I want to see how Kurama and Sano meet up (maybe while Sano is trying and failing in his search for Ken?). I WANT AN UPDATE!

Will you write more of this story? It's been almost two years since you updated, and I'm still checking it for new chapters almost every week. It's really good, so please continue it.

Heya! This is one interesting little ficcy! It's full of action and mystery! What are the tasks? What needs to be finished? Hiei couldn't hurt Kurama because he was an innocent (in a sense) right? What's going to happen? Will our two favourite duos join together? Please update soon! (though I did read in your bio that it would take about a month for an update in this particular story, I would just like to encourage you anyway! ^_^ Hopes you get the next chappie out soon! ::n.n::

:) i like

aaiya! i love it...buti must say...i like the ones with kurama and hiei more then with sano...and there's way too many sentences in one paragraph but otherwise...im commin back for more

The character thoughts here are wonderous.

Well, that's interesting! I've always liked Sano/Kenshin! LOL Poor Hiei.

^_~

DreamWeaver

UPDATE PLEASE!

WHEN ARE U GOING TO UPDATE? I /HAVE/ BEEN WAITING 'PATIENTLY' U KNO!