aww, cute!

the story was cool a bit short though good work.

The whole story was great; the one thing I would suggest to correct is Kevin's line, "Every right. America's a free country you know..." They were in China for this tournament.

^^ beautiful! I love it! Does it stop there? I hope not! you should do a 2nd chapter! *wink*

...I think I've got to read this, (also, your Sprited Awat story is good^_^ I just never had the time to review,lol)

Cute!^-^ that was sweet. Maybe you can read mine. It's, I'm Always With You.

COUNTINUE!

excellent story

but i want to teel you the third round of that match was the longest, so

that's about it

I love your story!

awsome fell in love with it you should keep going on this i cant wiat for the next part if you do...

s64-another good one write more write more!

yami s64- you havn't even watched that episode.

s64- only one i havn't watched

yami s64- you're only 11 you souldn't be reading romance storys. Go back to humor please!

s64- R/M 4eva!

Short and Sweet! I watch Beyblade sometimes when I get a chance and that episode with Ray and Meriah was my FAVORITE! I haven't seen it since a long time ago. Wish I could though!

Nice..fic! keep on goin ur doing a vory great job!^_~

this story roxed!it totally sucks that that didn't happen in the real episode!please write more

kawaiii but maybe you should add more like the time when ray collaspes in that ep neart the end against.. what's his name? bryan... in the russian team... that would make it even more kawaii~! hehhehehe i'm not ok lol anyways, peace out~

Oh, that was so good and sweet. Three minutes? They can hold their breaths for that long?