Fuck that. I wouldn't want Buffy to come back if she was my sister. If she'd rather run off and be depressed about her monster of a boyfriend than rather being with her family.. fuck her.

Neat! :) I like it. Very sweet, as well as very bittersweet in some parts as well. :) Plus, I like Dawn Summers, and Michelle Trachtenberg's portrayal of her in the series was really good, too. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very awesome and phenomenally creative writing! :)

Beautiful!

Ahh, why doesn't this have more reviews?

It's good. Painful, but good. Very good.

I like it a lot.

You have an amazing gift of taking small aspects of something and using them to create a charcter's world. You seem to take small things said or implied in dialogue and use them to make these fictonal characters into real, living, breathing people. I envy you, as I'm sure many other writers do.

Oh my gosh...this was awesome! I started writing my idea of what Dawn felt like during Buffy's absense too, and I actually like your version better. You made Dawn's feelings very real, and there were a couple times where I almost cried. Excellent, excellent, excellent.

So sweet.i nearly and buffy's relationship was very well done.

This piece was really touching. It would explain a lot about the attitude the sisters have towards each other now. Of course, the show no longer acknowledges such things, but it'd be cool to see you write follow ups.

Great job of filling in a gap!