| Reviews for Schism |
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   LucidKren chapter 1 . 2/10 Oh my goodness, what a tease of a story! But I can imagine how it would go down from there. This was a really neat set up. :) |
| Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 9/1/2016 *screams* I did not see that coming! Of course it would take someone like Hughes to convince Al to settle down! Hahaha. This is perfect. But what a train ride! My stomach was in knots from the part where they take Al away to the very end! Wow. |
| Deadlycake chapter 1 . 5/10/2016 im so happy |
| Gwntan12 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016 Oh my! I swore I was going to freak out when I found out Alphonse had been adopted by Hughes! WAAAH! I literally crying by the end, in happiness! But, I have to know what happens next! I hope a muse decides to hit you! |
| LeChick chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 Oh god, I hope a muse drop kicks you after all this time into making this a two-shot and letting us see the freak out |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 You are a genius. After I devoured ABNE,Home,IF,Dear brother and Unlocked,I decidedto see all your works and I was hoping,maybe, that since you are seemingly in a FMA AU mindset you could add a bit more to this work,since it really deserves it 3 |
| The Dark Crimson Blood chapter 1 . 5/30/2015 I really do hope you make it into a two shot. I enjoyed reading this story and it feels like it should be continued. If you don't, that's okay too. Anyway, thanks for writing this, as well as many of your other stories that I've come to love. You're an amazing writer. |
| TheMidnightwolf15 chapter 1 . 5/23/2015 wow...this was so heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. beautifully written but I do think it needs a bit more added to it. the last little bit of it feels to much like an evil cliffhanger. maybe one, slightly longer chapter will give this slightly more closure. I know you say that its meant to be a one-shot, but a chapter 2 wont hurt. :) |
| Miko1st chapter 1 . 5/22/2015 Hey, don't stop there! What happens next? This story was getting even better! |
| Silaya Arctic Prower chapter 1 . 2/7/2015 Ermahgerd plez continue this! I wanna see what happens when they're reunited! |
| luluhrh chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 . . . *cries* IT'S TOO BEAUTIFUL! so Al was adopted by Hughes? makes sense. it's perfect! i love it! |
| birdlover101 chapter 1 . 1/15/2015 This is absolutely amazing. I know you said this was only a one-shot, maybe a two-shot, but you have to do something. It would be a crime to leave it like this. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2015 nooooooooooo two-shot! two-shot! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2015 Lol al got adopted by the Hughes and two MAKE IT A TWO SHOT I BEG OF YOU |
| JazmineElric chapter 1 . 12/18/2014 Awesome :) do you plan on making this a two-shot? -JazmineElric |