Just wanted to say, it's fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. And you know what? So is the writer

This is so sad and awesome at the same time. I love it! Tennant Edward Elic... I don't know if the Universe could handle that!

G! Im so upset with this amazing work! I want more... i want the Doctor to speak to Ed about Rose and the hole parallel universe... i just want to read more, not many people can make a Doctor Who story and make the reader hear the doctor speak within their minds... i had that happen along with Ed and Al, i sore them do everything in this. At first i thought it would be another stupid Doctor Who story with Clara skolding the Doctor for knocking someone over, but no i got a Ten who spoke like he knew everything, like he remebered... remembered all too well. Sorry for the story of my own, i just love this oh so much and if u still like the two thing, maybe you could updated.

This shall not become a oneshot. this shall become the greatest multichapter story in the history of fanfiction!

please continue this! its so awesome! XD

. . . I cried.

Is it wrong for me to wish that Ed finds another way home? Is it bad that I wish I could change this story?

No?

Okay. Well, I wish I could change this story.

But, I still love it. Maybe Ed and Al don't have each other any more, but at least they both have somebody. :')