Well, this is my first time reading your writings, and I must say, I'm rather impressed. Your Kira is a convincing villain, and I am interested in what further she has in store for our poor Anji.

First off, kudos to the Guilty Gear and Suikoden fics. It's very delightful to see a really good writer channel her creative energies on two of my favorite fandoms. XD

I think you really nailed down the characters. On a personal note, I've always imagined Sol to be totally freelance, so I find the Sam/cellphone scenario to be rather comical. ;;

Your OC, Kira-I like the way you portray her, the way you manage to squeeze her in the story without really ruffling the canon details. And just the fact that she's not one of those Mary Sue OCs makes me happy. She reminds me too much of I-No, though. P

The story itself runs very well. Your so-called "detail whoring" isn't boring at all, and it really does build up a lot of awesome character development. Each chapter slides in smoothly. It seems to be more focused on conspiracies, although I really wouldn't mind some action~ ;P

are you ever updating? ;_;

Geez! STILL no new chapters? Are you still alive?

This... this story... IS THE BEST! Though I did find a tiny mistake in one chapter. Testament was talking about Kira and had already stated her name and later Sol asked for it as if it was never mentioned... But I don't think Sol is one to listen to anyone anyway. ; Still, this has got to be one of the best stories on . One of the cream of da crop.
Keep it up, I'm really interested.

I like where you're going with this, mainly because it is a fic that has Anji and the prospect of being updated relatively soon. *fangirl fangirl* Love your characterisation, they're mainly in character. The only things that detract are a few inaccuracies which reviewers before me have already pointed out. All in all, good fic. But the cliffhangers are killing me.

I'm realy enjoying this fic! - You ceap calling it craptacular, but I disagree. ;) My favorite character is Testament, and I realy think you understand him well. I wish I could think of more to say...perhaps another time. Ceap up the good work. I'll try to critique once I've gotten to know the characters better myself. ;)

I wasn't kidding when I said that it wasn't a very good update. ;) Everything'll get edited later.
There's a reason for Kira's abilities, which will be explained as I go (though honestly it doesn't seem implausible. If Millia can kill people with her hair, and the yo-yo masta from hell can have an evil, sentient teddy bear, then it's hard to dictate what's possible and what isn't. Also keeping in mind that she's not a drone; she was human before, like Testament), but I wanted to save that for the next chapter.

OMG! you actually updated! and what have you done to Anji ;_; Sol is angry and Testament is confused... Kira is a fruitcake!
please update soon~! :3

Well, it's good to see you're not dead, contrary to some popular belief. So, where to start? You added in Dizzy on the Mayship segment. It felt a bit too cliched to me. I think everyone and their grandmas has a had a Dizzy segment akin to that, but that doesn't make it bad. It was well written for what it was, just very cliched. The character named Leap was a nice touch, if not a bit of a laughable entry.
Going to the storyline following the main characters, it feels in the sam dark futuristic cop scene, feeling slightly like a retro future cop station (think of that one short from the Animatrix or L.A. Confidential, but in the future). You could hold your own against James Patterson, if you had the right time periods. P Anyway, it was well wirtten, and that common self-hardness is something we all endure. Sure, you came off of a long break, but your re-entry is a finely placed chapter which will hopefully lead to many more to come.
A few things that bothered me were that since when could a Gear read minds? Maybe that's your authoritistic touch, but it seemed a bit Vulcan to me. In the vein of my previous reviews, I'll make a prediction on what happens next, as this is a dramatic tension mystery, eh? Where's the fun if you can't predict? So, here goes. Possibly, once finding all of Anji's thoughts out, she'll seek out Testament, reunite with Sol in a violent way, and take Testament with her (somehow). Then, she'll have some new Justice or an Alpha Gear brainwash him, and might turn Anji into a Gear as well (like Data in that one Star Trek movie). Maybe this is all completely stupid, but maybe it gives you an idea as to throw off your base readers, eh?

(Australian accent) Croikay! you actually updated! Jolly good for you, old chum! it appears that all the older authors are coming back to town, I just had anice chat with KR2, he said he planning a new fic. Bloody good for all of us!
Its a renaissance of Guilty Gear Fiction!

Hey! I guess it's been a while since you updated this fic, but I only just found it so I guess I'll review .

This fic is definately one of the better GG fics I've come across. The writing is very descriptive and fun, and the characterizations are, for the most part, really well done. Especially Testament and Dizzy. It's good to find a fic that can capture both their complicated characters.

As for something to critique, I have to say your dialogue seems a little awkward at times. Especially in...chapter 2, I think it was, between Testament and Anji. It certainly is engaging, but at the same time it's almost unnecessarily complicated. Like...the word "indefatiguable." I can't imagine most people have ever come across the word, let alone used it. I mean, you obviously know your vocabulary, but in places it comes off as being a little contrived.

Other than that, and a few inaccuracies canon-wise (which can't be helped 'cause they keep putting out new games adding things :P), this is a nice fic. I hope you continue.

i was rummagig through some gg fics...and ran across this diamond in the rough! *sigh* beautiful, just beautiful. though...a bit of a cliffhanger...please update sometime soon, as i cannot wait. on another note...marry me! become my queen of the night and have my children!

Um...I seem to be behind...Last update: 4 months ago...O.o;

Er...But this is a good plot! It's not completely yuri or yaoi-centered like most of the other GG fics out there! Tis a big plus!

Trent & Blake: O.O What the hell are you saying! You're so yaoi-crazed, you created us just to hook us up!

-_-; Er...sh, guys. 6;; I just don't like the 3 main GG yaoi pairings...SolxKy's almost always rape, AnjixChipp is too typical, and VenomxZato is too...scary. *shudders* And yuri's...just not my thing. Anyway...

As I was saying, it's very very excruciatingly rare to find a GG fic not centered on re-hashed romance or character-bashing humor. (...though, I really do dislike Jam...) I really appreciate you for writing this one (and "Creative License" .) and I really hope that you're still writing this or at least plan to finish it sometime. I mean, come on, you've got poor Anji knocked out by a crazy Gear and no one knows it yet! Plus, it's got Testament *and* Sol *and* Ky looking and acting in character! *_* I hate it when ppl make Ky look like an idiot kid (...this goes back to that rape thing above *glares*...) or write Testament off as being overly feminine (...must...ignore...the skirt...x.x) or make Sol out to be so arrogant that he's annoying. *rolls eyes* Yes, yes, I'm sure you know all this already, but I don't want you to ever do it. OOC-ness is quite evil if done badly...(yeah, that makes a whole lotta sense...)

Here's my final plea~ Please please please *please* update "Juggernaut." It's left at a bad cliff-hanger and it's kind is an endangered species... And don't forget it's *good* and at least one reader is waiting for more. _

More chapters makes me a happy turk. Very well-done, I want to read more.