MOREEE!

Oh no the crew doesn't sound terribly convinced, how will they get out of this mess? Will they have to explain their odd sleeping predicament?
Ah my apologies for not reviewing the other chapters, I just had to catch up.
I really like the plot you've created here and this universe that you've put together. This complex mixing of time, places and people. I don't rightly understand it all like Gol D. was a gangster but Zeff was a pirate so clearly not everything is synonymous but I like it. I like these situations you've precariously placed our heroes in as well, riotly humurous situations. I look forward to your next chapter

This was all SO adorable! I don't ship them, but it's SO cute anyway! What a wonderful AU! Can't wait for more! The Zeff bits, in particular, are insanely awesome! Rock on!

Plz write moar!

good save for a couple of things: liberal use of slurs and aggressive transmisogyny. this fic couldve been so much better if you hadnt decided to toss around words like r*tard and tr*nny. just because oda is ableist and transmisogynistic doesn't mean you have to be :-(

*pawing at you*I wanna read more ~ 00 I also want ti fund out how Zoro is going to fit in the 'Pirate King' series as well as this plan Law is putting into motion~ 3

Hi,
I've just discovered your story yesterday and it's really good. You have a nice and fluent writing, it's really easy to follow you. Your story is interesting and I am looking forward the next chapter! You do a good work not to be too much OOC in a UA and it's very pleasant.
Thanks for sharing your fiction

(and sorry for any mistake, I am not a english langage native)

Is great! Continue plz! Is Lovee!

I love your story even more with this chapter ahah . The feelings are slowly but surely creating themselves and going deeply inside the head of those two dorks and I love it. The fact that now they are obligated to act as a couple is even more enjoyable:D I really love how you use sanji's character because he seems really smart (he really is but in your story it seems that he is thinking about everything and that he really enjoy manipulating others sentences/mind and I really like it!
Continue like this :D

For the moment I really live this story,the plot is interesting,I love sanjis character and handsomeness ahah I really liked the two kiss and also the relationship if sanji with Iva ahah. I cant wait to read more and see how the relation and the situation will evolve so continue like this I really appreciated it and I'm just begging for more :D

I really like it so far. Please continue writing it.

You got my attention, that was a good set up for the story.

I'm excited to read this! Your writing style is very easy to follow and everything flows perfectly. I wonder why Sanji surrendered hmmm.