| Reviews for A Herd in Space |
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Blaze1992 chapter 3 . 7/5 Okay so umm surprised that this isn't larger but guess your muse on it died or run away, though I do like you adding in new races to the plot. |
1Billy-234 chapter 3 . 5/7 Good story looking forward to reading more of it when it is written |
Keldin chapter 1 . 3/14 So, now that I've had a chance to reread Chaotic Space, I've started rereading this in order to get to the latest chapter. All of your stories are great, of course, but there is one thing that makes me twitchy when I read this series. Ukyo's male kunoichi partner is Konatsu. Every time I see 'kotatsu,' the image of a low table with a heater under it throws my suspension of disbelief off briefly. |
OBSERVER01 chapter 3 . 1/1 Great chapter |
spicarus chapter 3 . 12/28/2017 I feel happy. I feel happy. You finally updated this story. Exultant exclamations abound. Just one tiny little issue. When the supercarriers jump away from the battle you have them go "...dozens of light years away, still within com range..." Just what are they using for communications if such a distance isn't producing a delay of dozens of years? The last I checked a light year was defined as the distance light travels in a year (earth standard, approximately 365.25 days). |
Beowulf-BX chapter 3 . 12/28/2017 Hell of a treat man. Love the chapter and a very smooth one at that. |
Luke Dragneel chapter 3 . 12/26/2017 Great to see this story again, but I do understand why you want to concentrate on the two SW stories first and foremost. The fight scene was spot on, both for how the UHBA handled the fight and the problems they had prior and during the fight itself that could have ended in major catastrophe had no one spoke up about it. I also like that you expanded Humanity's various ships/fighters designs while updating the original/prototype ships that were created in response to the Zentraedi threat. I also believe you nailed Alexei's Russian stereotype on the head in terms of how quickly they can go from merrily tipsy to seriously sober without being sober. That was beautifully done in my opinion. I am curious to how this new race will interact with the UHBA, especially after finding out what the B portion of that means. *Completely off topic right now, but have you ever watched/read the Grimgar anime series? It seems like it would be a great playground for crossovers and those wanting to write a gamer-like/medieval setting that's both not a major story(Game of Thrones/Lord of The Rings/etc.) and allows for a much more variation in terms of landscape and creatures while still keeping that feel of real life. While Grimgar's story is kind of slow(as it is build around the concept of the characters' slow progression from bottom feeders to heroes and their interactions with each other) that doesn't necessarily mean a fanfiction of it has to be the same pace or that the canon pace is all that bad.* Ok back on topic! I am curious as to what the new aliens will look like and see if other aliens will be hostile or friendly. It is always important to be prepared in case the alien race you just helped isn't going to just turn around and stab you in the gut cause their assholes(even if they happen to be the alien version of Veela, pretty people can be even worse than the Predators, who are fairly straightforward). |
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 3 . 12/26/2017 And there’s the cliffhanger. Damn, though it was fun to return to read this fic again after a couple years. Merry Christmas dude. |
Rydan fall chapter 3 . 12/26/2017 And so it starts, do wonder where we are in Macross/Robotech in terms of the unknowns. So many possibilities. Still think you made Ranma his fighter evolve a bit too much, to fast, with way too much design thoughts in it. Its not really acidentaly haphaszardous crystalian organic, you know. The Zentreadi their self healing hull plating would have made a nice medium for this, if Ranma had used a few in order to fix his fighter the first time around. Ad in the possibility that the fast packs might also have used that same hull material and a change in that one plane wrecks might have had a leaking protoculture power cell and... Well, you could have used the Ki strenghtenings technique as what kicked it off. Then there was the cockpit upgrade, all ready for heavy duty combat, without any work in not only streamlining it all, but also working together as one unit/system. Or that it stayed a one seater, you know. Lets not even talk about the other parts of the hull. Although it would have been funny if Ranma his fighter had missformed itself into a more Vic Viper shape, that still needed to be streamlined, lined and balanced out, while oddly mounted parts had to be removed, like a engine sticking out from a wingtip, outwards. Oddly places thruster packs, make manouvering(?) sooo much fun. Weirdly fused electronics, some working, some not. Just the hassle to get her back into flying shape would have been fun, as well as Ranma figurly fighting with Doctor Lang in order to get his fighter back. Who then could have been studying it to figure out how and why it happend, if it could be replicated, any possible improvents to be found and how to get it bak into a properly designed flying shape, without having a updated set of blueprints. That could have been sooo much fun, bit of a shame, really. O well, you did not go there in the first story, so we have to live with it, bit of a shame, though, since you could have made that fighter the most hated hangar bird there is, with the above happening when damaged. For example, never let unknown wreckes laying next to it, if its damaged, else we never get to figure it out before it absorves it. And Macross II could have sooo very well fitted in after the canon invasion of Earth, by The Masters, as part of their second and final try to get the SDF-1 and its Matrix. On the other hand, Earth was not the first to steal Zentreadi Patrol Fleets, with cultural contimination. Nor was there only one factory asteriod. Culture to counter cultural contimination? That does sound like Macross II, you know. And it also sounds very Sound Force like, as well. So you could place the Macross II happenings in the area of Macross Quarters, Delta and Frontier, as a stop stealing my clone forces. O well, you write well and you keep bringing in the unexpected angles, which are always fun. Glad to see you have gotten somewhere in your research, enough to write the next chapter. Lets see where it takes us, next. |
Jerry Unipeg chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 great chapter, will done with fleet battle. Nice to see a new chapter to this story. |
mikaerusan chapter 1 . 12/25/2017 When you use an acronym like CAG for the first time in a story, you better explain it then, because by the time you've used it 4 times without explanation, it means I have had to leave the story to find out what the acronym meant, and once I did so realized that if you didn't care enough to explain it yourself, i don't care enough to continue reading. If you explained it in the prequel when it first showed up, it was fine for the entire rest of that story, but that story is done, you STILL need to explain it again here, as who knows how long it has been since the last "book" was read. It doesn't need to be anything more than using the long form once in a conversation, but it needs to be done |
Tribernator chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 YAY! I was wondering if this story would ever continue. I realize its rough, having like, 50 stories all in need of updates because they are all awesome, but thats the burden you bear for having so many great ideas for stories! lol |
Major Simi chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 Wow another chapter. Good chapter. Well let's hope they can make some friends. Anyway have a merry Christmas and a happy New Year |
god of all chapter 3 . 12/25/2017 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
Ranmaleopard chapter 3 . 12/24/2017 This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue. Enjoy your Christmas |