Reviews for Innocence
rosa chapter 16 . 12/9/2015
You must be a big fan of MarauderLover7.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
Shame on you.
For anyone who wants to read the original, non plagiarised version, it's written by MarauderLover7
Cassie Ruesch chapter 16 . 12/9/2015
I really enjoy reading your story.
Luciferkaine chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
If anyone wants to read the original and not the plagiarised one search for Marauderlover7 they've already finished nearly three books
JJFan chapter 13 . 11/30/2015
I know it's the website rather than you, because a lot of people have the same problem, but it's very annoying the way there are no scene breaks. Very distracting.
GinnyPotter6891 chapter 13 . 11/24/2015
Ooh, love the length of this chapter! You packed a lot of information and people in it. Dare we hope that it was Large Marge who got taken? Harry without eyebrows or lashes is funny but weird at the same time. I'm glad to see Kreacher coming around. Thanks for another superb chapter!
tsalyah chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
This is blatant plagiarism. Shame on you!
Don't be a d**k, write your own fic.
katiek121 chapter 12 . 11/22/2015
It was a good chapter! I would recommend putting some sort of space or page break between each scene though. It was a little confusing to folloe since there wasn't really a transition or space between them.
GinnyPotter6891 chapter 12 . 11/22/2015
I enjoyed the scene with the locket Horcrux and conversations between Harry and Sirius ver much but am wondering when Remus is going to to learn that Sirius is not the betrayer and murderer that Remus thinks he is. I also liked the interaction between Remus and Tonks. When Dumbkrbore stalked Remus, "my dear boy," I got shivers as I heard the phrase in Quirrel's voice. Keep up the goid work! Hopefully you'll be able to give us another chapter soon. :)
katiek121 chapter 11 . 11/18/2015
Excellent chapter! I liked the scene with Snape the most. Hopefully, they can destroy the locket horcrux.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2015
Oooooh! ;)
GinnyPotter6891 chapter 11 . 11/17/2015
Oh. My. Goodness! Not a cliffie! Not now! I'm going to be on pins and needles until you put up the next chapter! Great chapter!
katiek121 chapter 10 . 11/16/2015
Nice chapters! I like the chapter where Harry met the Weasley's and Lupine n found him the best. I just wish Lupin would have considered what Sirius and Harry told him.
Jaculus chapter 10 . 11/16/2015
love this story all the aspects are so appealing that i get stuck reading it its like a moth drawn to a flame it just brings you in to the story very well done hope to see more soon
GinnyPotter6891 chapter 10 . 11/15/2015
Although I would much rather have read about Harry/Sirius/Remus, this was an enlightening and therefore important the image of Snape's mind as a dungeon and potions storeroom. Very clever! Thank you for the triple treat!
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