I think this is the first one you put on FFN. I like the idea of a Sirius and Ginny conversation. Any story that dreamed of a Sirius beyond book five makes me miss him and what he could have been.

As someone who doesn't like Harry, I am surprised that you wrote this, but then again, he is "off stage". It's like how I wrote Ron in my fic "Scenes on a Train".

My only suggestion here would be to redo the html to have the conversation bits look like conversation. You can always use the italics font to make the lyrics different from the rest of the story.

That was cute, but i think Ginny deserves a little romance. Well written though.

Awww. How sweet. *wipes tear from eye* Very good.

Aww ... I really love the Faith Hill song, "There You'll Be"! It's so lovely!

This story was really sad, but it was also really good. I liked it! However, there were a few punctuality errors - nothing a good beta couldn't fix.

Bye-bye

Moi!

i like this story, it's different but good, i hope you continue writing since you have a obvious talent for it.

truly yours

little blue fud

(aka jenniferj)

OMG this is a great short story, it's so sad, but it's soo good. You should write more. Anyway good job!