Reviews for Metamorphosis I: Regression
cfccfc chapter 7 . 8/7/2015
Oops, hit the "post button on my phone before I was finished. Anyway, as I was saying, I see Logan more as milquetoast than anything else. And I've lost my train of thought now, so I'll end this with, I had a blast reading this and now I'm off to read Parts II and III.
cfccfc chapter 8 . 8/7/2015
I can't believe that it has been over 5.5 years since someone/anyone has left a review here. Shame on them. This was too adorable and entertaining not to reward the author for a job well done.

I arrived here via Supernatural. A friend refers to Alec as "Baby Dean," and after finally seeing the DA eps, I understand why. I don't know if it was Jensen or someone else who incorporated bits of Alec into Dean, it doesn't matter now. I just know that I've fallen for both of them.

I love what you wrote here. I enjoyed how you portrayed both versions of Alec, and I especially enjoyed how you kept the other characters in character as they dealt with the overgrown man-child (well, except for Logan, who I see more like
Whirlwind421 chapter 8 . 2/4/2010
Awesome story! I love it! It's very refreshing. Innocent and sweet and a whole lot of lovely angst too!
wild wolf free17 chapter 8 . 1/1/2010
Nicely done!
Whiteraven2005 chapter 5 . 7/26/2009
Alec is just too adorable for words! How does Max resist fussing over him? Loved the scenes with Alec and Josh, so sweet.
Tracie113 chapter 8 . 12/31/2008
Just wanted to say I love this story it is just so adorable and to whoever that reviewed how they didn't like the story cus Alec doesn't normally act like that... Well DUH hello he's suppose to act like a 5 year old kid in here... That's the whole point of the story... So get a clue before u write bad reviews... because when I first came upon this story I wasn't gonna read it because of that review... But I'm so glad I read it now cus it's one of the best DA story I've read... So to whoever that left that mean review you suck cus if u don't like how the characters r portray in these fanfictions than I suggest u don't read fanfictions cus hello they're fanfiction for a reason here!
Sharon chapter 8 . 7/7/2008
Ok - read your story and did I like it is the question running through my head. The best answer to that would be - NO!

This story started out so good but after Chapter 2 I can only ask - what the hell happened?

Lets talk about the characters. Max isn't that much of a bitch all the time, Logan would never do or say anything that he did and he would take the computer help offered cause he knows that the X5's are really smart. The character Alec as a child - hell no he wouldn't act like that. Why you ask? Simply put he was raised as a soldier, tortured when the others escaped & sent to re-education. He wouldn't act like that if he reverted to the mindset of a child.

Anyway, that's how I feel about your story. I almost gave up on it but I wanted to see how you ended it. I kinda feel like I just wasted my time.

I will check out your other stories though.
ParkerEvanss chapter 3 . 2/1/2008
That was another really fun chapter. I love how she's taking care of him at the same time as she is seeming to realize how much she cares about him. Good job :)
ParkerEvanss chapter 2 . 2/1/2008
Okay, you definitely have my curiousity up. It's kind of reminding me of "Regarding Henry," only I love the cocky Alec, so I hope that he returns somewhere in this. Good chapter.
ParkerEvanss chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Wow! That was an awesome beginning! Looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
iluvaqt chapter 8 . 9/24/2007
haha, Logan an old geezer. I just can't believe that Logan didn't even try the program. He had a hint at the kind of training Max had as a child with communications...pompus doesn't seem to cover it. And the chaos Alec made of OC's bathroom and Logan's penthouse reminds me of my niece upon discovering nail polish and lipstick. This was loads of fun and I get what you mean by it possibly fitting in as canon, I just can't figure out when. I loved it a lot. Brilliantly written. Off to read more.
pringle.sam chapter 8 . 7/31/2007
No! I don't want the next part to be not fluffy and happy! I want happy child Alec, not bloody angst ridden Alec!

If I give you ice cream, can I have more M/A fluff? Please? Please? Flidais! (not at all sure how to stretch out your name...)
pringle.sam chapter 6 . 7/31/2007
You really hate Logan that much? He's really not that bad.. Really. Compared to some people. He's just..reserved. And single minded.

I love the old lady! She was awesome :D
pringle.sam chapter 5 . 7/31/2007
This makes me so happy! I love A/M...so cute.

Little Alec would be SO ADORABLE! I love it so much, but I'm having a hard time actually picturing Jensen acting like a little kid.. much to my disappointment..

You say you are writing more such? WONDERFUL! XD
McWicca chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
This was a really cute story that made me giggle profusely. I could see everything happening vividly in my head, which is a testament to your writing.

Here's what I loved the most:

-Max bitching that lady out. YYMFY.

-The Alec and Joshua scenes. They turned me into complete mush.

-The comparison to Ben and the "I'm not Ben! You named me!" exchange. I was so done after that.

-When Alec was trying to tell Logan that he's an idiot and he's like "That's just silly." That line KILLED me. I'm still laughing on the inside.

My only real criticsm is that Logan was a bit OOC, especially with the whole "He'll end up like his psyco brother" comment. I feel like that something that Logan would think but never say. But I appreciate that Logan had to be a bitch for the story to work, and a part of me was sort of loving it.
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