I cannot even describe! How damn tense I felt throughout this chapter!

You need to stop giving this old man heart attacks.
I'm kidding, keep up the good work! :D

Well, you got me worried. Now anything can happen .

D8 Well hoooolly shit! This chapter was just everywhere! In a good way.

First tense, then calming now panic! DX OH my god!

:D Fantastic work. :3

:c Oh why must you tease with such a cliff hanger?

Hey! :D
Wow, I can see the shit hit the fan finally, well done! XD Sam's a real bitch. It's funny how BB's reaction kind of reminds me of my bf's reaction to any bad news I bring about my bff's relationship. She's got bad luck with guys ;/
I really hope you don't make it a total drama, 'cause I'm a happy ending person XD

Change is hard. ANy kind of change, I really do hope Jinx and Roy come out of this okay.

I'm glad Raven is still there for her as a good friend. c:

:c I really do hope things are okay for the couple.

Fuck you Sam.

I liked this chapter a lot! :D I'm glad Roy explained it all and Jinxie wasn't all like the chicks in my grandma's soap operas XD Because yes, such fanfiction happens awfully often (I'm always scared I do that with mine .) :D Needless to say I hate Sam w I wonder what else you've got planned for them? :)

But, I don't know, maybe because those chapters are so long, I find it very difficult to read because of all the typos, missing words, words that sound the same but don't mean the same and are used instead of the correct ones... etc. The text is understandable, but such small things take away the pleasure of reading (and in this chap I found a lot of them). So I'm wondering if maybe some proof reading would be possible? If you don't have the time, I can do that for you XD Anyways, it's just my foreign opinion ;P

Keep writing! 3

X3 oh, that was so sweet. This chapter was very heart warming. I was kind of worried about that Sam girl, but glad things are still okay between Jinx and Roy c:

Oh, don't leave it like this. I know you have gotten shit for this story, but I love it. I just read it all in one sitting. You are one of my favorite writers on here, don't leave all your readers hanging like this!

Hiii XD

Just thought I'd let you know that I'm still reading and with joy :D You got me all teary with few moments. I'm very curious as to how Roy is going to solve this one, because he's in a serious shit right now w And Beastie OMFG, you poor thing XD Anyways, keep it rolling! 3
p.s. I was reading this chapter for two days... *dies* couldn't find any moment so long to read it as a whole TT~TT

You NEVER cease to amaze me! 8D Fantastic, fantastic chapter! XD

I really cannot wait for more 8D

Lol Raven belittles Beast Boy all the time but god forbid he retaliates one time. Tried reading it but couldn't stomach the incredibly unbelievable Rae/Jinx. I also don't understand why most writers hate the Jinx/KF pairing.

Definitely don't mean to be 'that' person, but this is bad. Not JP-Ryder bad mind you, but in the spectrum of lower quality fics (please don't get upset by this, damn near ninety percent of all fics posted for this fandom fall into that category). Your characters are OOC, the mature content is not really anything great, and your plot is rough and frankly crack. And not the good crack that gets people high and is amazing, no, I'm talking burnt crack that even the lowest of the low wouldn't touch. Seriously a bi Raven, what's your precedent for this? I definitely could see Jinx that way but Raven the emotionally stunned demoness? Really? C'mon, you could do better! I have faith in you. (To be honest, not really. Looked at your other stories and they were just as bad as this. But hey! Here's hoping for a better product!) So in conclusion, work on having things line up, I mean a crack fic will always be a crack fic. The only difference is something believable versus what you and many others have done, which is to create an unexplained and unjustified world with the intent of fulfilling whatever twisted fantasies you have thought up. No problems with slash, just the horrible plot/back-story that goes along with it.

:c I was super worried for Jinx in this chapter, like SUPER VERY worried.

Glad she may be okay though. Fucking Wally! That arse!

o3o That was hot! :D But so emotional at the end! X3 I loved it!

Maybe Gar can see Raven and Jinx have "fun" with one another? X3 tehehehe.

This seems like a promising story so I'm going to dig into it...