Oh I see where this is heading but in order to prove I am right you need to update. And if it is not too much, can I have a little Parental Roy. I even say please.

Awesome
Looking forward to what's next

What happen?! I really wanna know

Awww Poor little Edward TT

Hey I'm sorry I wont be able to update soon. My computer reset itself and deleted word. If anyone knows how I can get it again please PM me. Until next time.

this is so good! Please update!

Hello ! for a first fanfiction is 2 chapters are good but it is really too short, but it's a nice start or I would rather say no offense and introduction desoler I am French and I use google translation

You have no idea how much I love this story! Hope you update soon!

Oh man! Will they find Ed first? Or is someone else helping him right now? I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD

What's gonna happen! AHAHAHAH!
Can't wait for more!
It's so good so far!
When r u gonna update cause I can't wait!
Loving it :D

I hope the chapters would be longer! But thanks for updating Roy and Al find Edward? I hope they do, even if it would alse be interesting if the others did. Read you soon!

Wait, Roy once set the men's room on fire. That sounds hilarious. I wonder what it would look like animated?

Great job with this chapter. I hope they find Ed, and that he's not dead...

Please don't tell me he's dead. Edward Elric can't die, he can't!

Keep up the great work, looking forward to more :)

ED! Hang in there!
Hope u update soon! This was really good!
I love how you've portrayed Al :D can't wait for more :D

Oh no! Hopefully some good samaritan will help Ed! I gotta see what happens next! Looking forward to more! XD

Oh no, is Ed goin to be okay? I've gotta read more! Please update soon, this looks like it's going to be a great story :)