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That's a common error in stories for some reason. When Al's body and Ed's leg and arm were taken, they were eleven and ten. Not nine or eight or seven.

Ed had been eleven, and Al had been ten.

You're like way to nice to be writing torture it's a bit creepy.

I'm only on chapter too but I can already tell that this is going to be a great story, and that you are a great person lol

Hello! I read this story and it's great! I love how epic Alphonse was. (And uh, maybe sometime you could consider writing a story that features parental!royal as well? Though you don't have to by any means.) Uh, have a nice day and I'll check out some of your other stories!

A good read. I didn't enjoy the torture bit but the parental fluff and angst Mom :) thanks for the fic!

What would have happened if kimblee did end up taping ed?

AHHH I LOVE IT! xD
But seriously, great job! I'm a little bit of a sucker for Parental! RoyEd! :)

I really liked this when do you think the sequel will be written

I would like to see Roy walk out of the room before ed can stop him and completely snap literally and figuratively and scream at Kimblee for assaulting ed

Yay! Thank you for this chapter! I like this ending just as much as the other. But now I'm curious as to what kimblee meant by you may have won now but this is not the end

Thank you! I really liked that. And I'm glad you liked the invisible unicorn.:) p.s I actually am the one who originally asked for the bonus chapter :). I liked both endings. And when you're done with the sequel you should write a short story about how the sequel would change if kimblee had lived. Thanks again

This was really great!

Great chapter. You did a really good job writing this story. I hope you write more like this someday.

When is the bonus chapter coming?