Reviews for Observations
santaana chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Oh this is such a perfect sequel to 'Down Time'. And I find it very in character for Kathryn, for her to let her feelings slip in front of Ayala she had to be exhausted and looked in a turbo lift or else she would never down such a thing. Loved it so much, can't wait to read what happens next!
Celine Janeway chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Janeway's vulnerability at even a slip of personal information when it comes to Chakotay is brilliant. They really did needlessly torture themselves for seven years.
annejoy chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
Oh, I love this story!
Thank you!
Moonlitfaith chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Such a sweet take on a good friend trying to get to know his friend's love.
Made me giggle and squirm a little for them. Just the right notes. And so much right about the potato salad!
tmtcltb chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Lovely! A perfect mix of emotions with Ayala talking/thinking about his family and humor over the potato salad.
Rice Pips chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
How much do I want to see Janeway on Chakotay's arm at an Ayala family BBQ?! *wide arms action* THIS much!

Also loved Janeway's little slip about all the lovely things Chakotay made her!
lullabymoon chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Sweet! :)
Doc Yewll chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
muito legal, sua serie com Ayala!
skdrake chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
I'm glad you're reposting some of your old work.
scwusa chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Again well worth reposting. I love Ayala. You made a good friend to Chakotay and obvious he could be just as good to Janeway.
Bad Octopus chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
That was wonderful. I love Voyager, but one of its failings was its lack of minor characters. A crew of 150, and we basically only saw the main cast. So many missed opportunities. The writers really could have learned a lot from DS9.

That's why this one-shot is so refreshing. Just in this little story, we got a glimpse not only into Ayala's life, but also into his friendship with Chakotay, and the closeness of the Maquis crew members in general. Very nice. Wish this had happened on the show!
Mary S chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Another lovely one. Always in character and yet you write them with just that bit of a twist. Really well done.
Missyhissy3 chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
I love this one! And you write so well you don't need a beta reader anyway. I love how you round out Ayala's character and give him more depth with the details of his life on the Val Jean and with his family. And I think you capture exactly the right dynamic between the Captain and her adopted lieutenant - love seeing Janeway through his eyes. Great job! Hope you keep posting - I have several more days' holiday *gloating smirk* and your stories are the perfect accompaniment to the French sunshine :)))))
ArgyleTrekkie chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Do you know how very delighted I am that you are posting these stories again? Deeeeeeeeeeelighted. The Ayala themed ones are some of my favorite of all time. I am enjoying the re-read and hope that you will continue to post previous stories again and even maybe consider posting some new ones (Hint hint, wink wink). I love your style of writing immensely, especially when it comes to the Voyager crew.