Read it again. Would love to see Hermione and Harry
s reunion in the NGA

harry in this is a pussy just like the movies and books I always hated that

The romance seems incredibly forced thus far in the story. It makes no sense why Harry would be having "dreams of bushy haired green eyed children," when he and Hermione have barely said more than a few sentences to each other thus far, and canon to this point there is hardly any romantic feeling for Hermione to this point save Harry clearly acknowledging she is a girl at the Yule Ball. In fact he is infatuated with Cho up until their date Valentines day 5th year. There needs to be a reason driving the romance rather than one off comments. Romance needs to be developed with actual plot, not just one off comments such as dreams and Hermione staring at Harry's ass. Just a thought that some development would be nice before these feelings develop.

Great story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

This chapter was a piece of art! Thoroughly enjoyed it!

awww well done Yuuki. Well done. (tears up)

great story. I love stories where extended family step in and powerful, knowledgeable Harry.

the only things that confused me was

1. why Jonas' father was excommunicated too? I was unaware of him doing anything wrong.
2. Why the hell wasn't Dumbles veiled? He definately deserved it in this story.

Now that was truly a shock to the system! In none of Fumblewhore's plans was A, Harry survival given any really possibility nor B, Harry ever living to 1, take his family seats on the Wizengamot or 2, living long enough to even know of family on his father's side! Neither of which were of any concern of Fumblewhore the Great( at least great in his onw mind that is. ).

Oh if only the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder would get what he so truly deserves! In other words DEAD! He along with so many other never wish to leave the eighteenth century. They hold their world back and think they're doing the right thing. Fumbles is the power behind the throne so to speak. He has his plans for the magical world and they need him at the helm to work. But now Harry's doing a good job of throwing a hell of a lot of doubt about him to the world.

Oh yes, poor boy indeed! Now what's Fumbles excuse to keep Harry in Durskaban?!

None of this fits in with the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder's plans for Harry. Maybe with the entire Potter family behind him, Harry can destroy BOTH Dark Lords. Yes, I consider Fumbles a Dark Lord masquerading as the Leader of the Light. He seems far more concerned with saving DE lives then innocent ones. He refuses to allow DE's to be killed regardless of how many they've killed. Thus I just don't see him as being in anyway Light. Then when you also consider exactly what he's done to Harry personally and the students of Hogwash in general, you can't help but realize he is quite Dark.

While I'm far from perfect your Bata Marc the Unruly he missed at least one little goof in this chapter. " Harry looked out UP the room full of people " Try more like " Harry looked out UPON the room full of people ". Makes much more sense this way. BTW, I can't Bata for you nor anyone as I don't know punctuation nor do I spell better than third grade. I just get lucky every so often. Now then, I'm enjoying the story and realized from the title and summary that I had started this story before but lost it. I intend to finish it this time though.

Oh that poor Disorder member. Harry's supposed to be kept in the dark about everything dealing with the magical world by the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder's orders. Unfortunately, there's nothing he/she could do about Gringott's Secure Mail. I wouldn't put it past the Disorder member to've read the address off the envelope over Harry's shoulder and run to tell the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder about it. After all, the old fraud has been doing everything in his considerable power to prevent Harry learning anything about his family history. Why else would no one inside that supposed school or out tell Harry anything at all about his family?

What’s with this Henry shit

It is an amazing story and the way the character of harry as Lord Potter is crafted is quite phenomenal. Great job writing this story.

Love this story. You created a believable Lord Potter out of Harry. The rest of the Potters were so well framed I either loved them or will hate them until my dying day. great job!