Reviews for Meanwhile (One-Shot Collection)
Lunadragon x anime chapter 12 . 9/28
This is such a wonderful little slice of life series! I love how you characterized the Pokemon, making them all distinct from one another. I also appreciate how all of Ash's Pokemon aren't necessarily buddy buddy but are more allies for the Pokemon from his different regional teams! It gives great insight to the Pokemon they would hang out with while also giving this sense of normalcy and little family time growth, and the bit you had with Sceptile and Bayleef? BEAUTIFUL. I pretty much binge read all the chapters and I enjoyed the tone you had for each one shot. Thank you so much for this series
Lyra Nym chapter 12 . 7/13
You should put a story about Snivy, in his appearances he seemed to remember his former coach. I imagine that he had to live hell with him / her. I want to see your opinion.
Lyra Nym chapter 8 . 7/13
I do not know what to say ... after reading hundreds of stories, all with a depressed Sceptile, crying, angry at that stupid Meganium, with a broken heart ...
I love this story, this is the real Sceptile. I never thought that someone would give him back his dignity in this way. His story is completely credible, his motives are logical. This story is wonderful
Lyra Nym chapter 3 . 7/13
'' laugh '' This Oshawott. always with its occurrences.
Lyra Nym chapter 7 . 7/13
When Bayleef was a Chikorita she was very rough, only during her first appearance. I'm surprised that all the fanfiction show her as a sweet and kind pokemon. However, this chapter is perfect.
It hurts me Sceptile, it's my favorite and the poor guy must endure the presence of Bayleef.
Lyra Nym chapter 2 . 7/13
You are very good at capturing your personalities, in my stories I find it difficult
Lyra Nym chapter 1 . 7/13
This story is totally credible. Poor Bulbasaur, so many things he have to do and Heracross does not facilitate anything
Stormy1x2 chapter 9 . 6/22
Oh my GOD, this was my favorite chapter EVER! The military jargon as applied to Tauros just killed me DEAD. Loved this!
Infinite Nexus chapter 12 . 6/15
So, I found this on TV Trope’s recommendations list and I’m just so happy I did. These stories just have so much heart and that’s really what I look for. Well, that and good characters which you have also mastered. Everyone just seams so real while keeping to what we know for the show. I know you havn’t updated this for a while but if you did I would really love it.
I would really like a Squirtle chapter. Reading about Bulbasaur remembering him just makes me want to see their friendship more.
Also, please give Leavanny some appreciation from the others. That pile of decaying unworn clothes was just inexplicably heartbreaking.
To be honest though, I would be happy with anything and thanks for this so far.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/31
I know it isn’t realistic as greninja is away with squishy to fight the remains team flare but could u make one of greninja coming to oak’s lab? Perhaps he’s taking a rest and reuniting with ash or sth, it’ll be interesting to see the reactions of the rest! This story is really amazing btwit takes on a perspective we normally don’t see, in the games, even in the anime, makes the Pokemon seem much more complex with them having emotions feelings and more intelligent and human like than the anime explores keep up the good work~
Coca-Cola chapter 6 . 4/10
Can you make a chapter on Greninja coming to the ranch?
Guest chapter 12 . 4/5
Liked this chapter!

Personally im curious what scrappy is doing, was almost expecting him to try be a part of the totodile, gible oshawot group, but he isn't?

Also, he isn't the youngest anymore with a BIG baby Noivern now here.

Also looking forward to the greninja chapter you were planning to do!

How are the pokemon reacting to hearing that stays away again in alola, and to the sudden return of a visit?
Crystalitar chapter 11 . 4/4
Loved this take on Pikachu's backstory, my heart was aching!
Crystalitar chapter 10 . 4/4
This was wholesome and cute and YES I AGREE WITH HAWLUCHA DAD
Crystalitar chapter 7 . 4/4
I KNOWSS

IT IS BC OF THE HEARTBREAK AAAH

Good writing, and i also love how Leavanny is so nice but knows he is seen as the weird one aah
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