This story line is incredible. I love Lucy as a working mage. It's so unique!

Yeah, this chapter got me laughing. Though joining the team could seem rather sudden it seems quite a lot like life and hence fitting. Their reactions were even more priceless. Good work as always.

The Celestial Spirit's characterizations are making me think on how to write them in my own story. It's very insightful. Good work :)

I'm impressed by this. Usually, the first chapter isn't hooking for many fan fiction stories and only gets interesting half-way in but not this one. I am hooked and following the line ;)

THIS. THIS LUCY.
This story is great and I love it and I really wish we had more au-Lucy’s with this ‘what if’ business twist. And the changed spirit relationships just feel so natural and appealing! I like Lucy a lot as a character in terms of potential but not of execution canonically, and I feel like this story manages the rare trait of portraying that potential without completely warping her character. I really enjoyed what was written and hope you continue to write more! Thanks! :)

- Aliathe (unlogged on mobile)

Oh man, Lucy~ This story is going places I haven't seen before and I love it! Thanks for the delightful chapter.

This is such an amazing story! I really like the idea, can't wait for the chapter!

I love Lucy so much it hurts. She's so determined and willful in this I love it. Everyone is so surprised at her choice to join the thunder tribe, and so am I. I really like it, it's something new and I think that it could be developed really well. Lucy has a much more responsible personality, seeming more mature than she should be at fourteen so I think it does well that she is sitting at the cool kids table. I especially like her relationship with Aquarius in this. It's so warm and lovely. Thank you updating, I had to reread the entire story again because I like it so much!

I love this story!

god i love that answer "magic"

I. Adore. This. Fic!
I am so in love with how you've expanded on Lucy's relationship with her spirits and cannot wait to see what you do with Cancer and Taurus.

I think I've fallen in love with this story! Amazing writing thus far and plot development based off the idea of one little thing within the canon story. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon! Until next time, ja-ne!

An update! I was really excited to read the new chapter! I love how you're going in such a fresh direction, with Lucy pretty much immediately dismissing everyone else at Fairy Tale in order to join the first group she encountered (rather like how she stuck to Natsu as the first guild member she meets)! Can't wait to see how she'll get along as the newest member of the Thunder God Tribe. I hope she can rescue poor Virgo soon!

So is Lucy 15?

I keep imagining Lucy as Elizabeth Midford from Kuroshitsuji.