Reviews for Different Magic
Guest chapter 8 . 9/20
Good
slytherinsal chapter 35 . 9/13
nice finish
slytherinsal chapter 19 . 9/13
now that's a potential breakthrough
slytherinsal chapter 12 . 9/13
interesting, they may have obliviated the fuzz but the call will have been recorded and records of it and people will want to know why there's no record of the police calling. The computer will flag it ...
major wallace chapter 35 . 5/22
Nice work
duskglow chapter 35 . 12/2/2017
I liked this story for the most part. My sole criticism is that there are things that are thrown in that are fascinating plot points of their own and then never mentioned again. Such as the attack on the castle during the thunderstorm. What was it? How did the defense happen? Wouldn't that have at least warranted a mention in the DP? It also didn't really have a real ending.
Svenion chapter 11 . 10/26/2017
the writing is good, but I'm a third of the way into the story and I don't really know what it's about, and romance troubles don't seem to help move the story
jukehero461 chapter 7 . 7/9/2017
I love this! People have mentioned Star Wars in fics before but a mini-Star Destroyer dispatching TIE fighters is adorable and funny and brilliant! Well done!
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 6/17/2017
Good chapter!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 6/17/2017
Excellent!
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 6/17/2017
Terrific! Very creative!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 6/17/2017
Excellent idea! Good start!
langeline chapter 35 . 6/3/2017
wwwWhat?
langeline chapter 33 . 6/3/2017
Draco?
langeline chapter 29 . 6/3/2017
How did Snape know HP wanted to talk to him?
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