I liked the chapter!

If you do not mind, I'd be more than happy to take this up at some point. If you would PM me to let me know if that's alright, I'd appreciate it. Also, if you do permit me to take it up, do you mind if I use the pairings I like for Yu and Minato?
Thanks,
Xanothos, Aristotle of a Random Lumpy Rock in Space

sucks ass

Dank

This is great

Pls continue T..T

Is this seriously one shot?

3. id recomend taking Q as an example, (as its the only cannon story in which we get a vieuw of his personality). i must admit that Makoto is troublesome to adapt in comparison to the other protagonists (naoya being even worse but Aigis, Tatsuya Maya and Yu all are observed from outside perspectives in cannon). the important thing i got from Q is that hes more "stoic" then "emo" if that makes sense. though by that point in his characterarc hes become a bit more comfortable around people
is rampantly contradicting with the reality of the earlier persona games. that is all i will say in that regard.
you stick to your caim that Persona is the third then this is a clear contradiction.
would core members have been involved in sumaru or persona 1, the chronology seems off.

Good story keep it up man