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Mark-and-Haley
4/21/05 . chapter 6
KYOOL!
Ginger Ninja
4/21/05 . chapter 63
Been waiting to review this for 2 days...for some reason I couldn't get FFN to load the whole page.

Anyway!

Colour me intrigued! The quotes have something to do with the sequel? I'll have to have another read and see what I make of them.

This was another packed chapter...at times I felt a little lost by all that was going on but a little concentration goes a long way ;) I am utterly amazed at how much you cram into one chapter - it's like living a whole short story every time you post. Pretty cool ^_^

Looking forward to the conclusion *GN*
Dragon's Hitokiri
4/21/05 . chapter 63
DUDE! that was amazing! i really wish i could writer like you! i'm amazed at this chapter and can't wait to read the ending which believe me i'll kill myself over waiting before i get to read it lol it's that good really! i'll make sure to read the next chapter so c ya then!
artemislee
4/20/05 . chapter 63
I waited so long for this to come out and it was worth the wait! Amazingly written! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! I know this is a short "I love this story to death" but I don't have much time. I can't wait please update soon I'll check everyday till it comes out and you should win a prize for making a story this beautiful and captivating. Until the last chapter then!
fle
4/20/05 . chapter 63
Wow...I really want to read the conclusion now! My friend who is sitting by me is in agreement.
Silvershadowfire
4/20/05 . chapter 63
That was one hell of a spectacular fight, even if it was utterly pointless in that it's inly effect was to tell Sora what he had to do.

Honestly, I was expecting that - the two are connected, after all. It's not so easy to break that connection. But is this an elaborate form of suicide, or something greater? No way to know until you update (thought I have some ideas)

Quite the wonderful imagery here as well - spectacular discriptions. And I love the one part with the miriad colours of sound.

Only problems I spotted were two cases of duplicate paragraphs:

1) starting with 'Sora knew that there were certain kinds...'

and

2)starting with 'Riku fought against the pain with all his strength, wings flinging...'

Just to let you know.

Thanks for the update, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Anime obsessed fan
4/20/05 . chapter 63
Yep, that was definitely an epic fight, especially with all those cosmic bodies in the background. Cool to see Riku and Sora's powers in action, and for all those Keychains Riku collected to come in useful. Though I wonder what'll happen to Sora and Riku's powers later on, as they probably can't be at full power like this in the sequel all the time, or things would be too easy. Unless things/enemies get even worse. And both of them are wielding enormous strength at the moment, but what'll happen to all that power once they reunite? Guess you'll explain it later. And is it me, or does Aros' ambition of creating a new, singular world slightly remind me of Ultimecia from FF8 (what with the time and space compression into one point)? Meh, probably just me, and the final battleground just made me think of the FF8 final battle background.

It was very nice to finally see the final boss fight (though I'm surprised there isn't more than one form, but then again, Aros is more than enough) after all this time.

Can't wait to see you finish up all those loose threads, wandering characters, lost souls, and stolen worlds. THIS FIC ROCKS! Here's to the conclusion! I hope its a happy ending, not a bittersweet ending like KH, but if there's a sequel, probably won't be an actual ending, but I hope at long last Sora gets to rest.
Pata Hikari
4/19/05 . chapter 63
Can you say BOO-FREAKING-YA!

This just keeps getting more awesome. ^_^

Aros is the most amazing KH fanfic villian EVER. =D

Man, if only he could be in KH2...D=
Blade Dragoon
4/19/05 . chapter 63
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Holy (BEEP). That was great. Incredible, stupendous, and any other words that mean incredible.
FallenStarAngel
4/19/05 . chapter 63
I really don't know what to say, excpet maybe, "Woah. Holy * that was good!" -_-

You are amazing. This whole chapter was a literary masterpiece, honest. I loved the whole part when Sora 'got his wings'. ^_^

"I may not have my own wings...but my friends have given me theirs!" ~ tis one of my favorite quotes now. I LOVE that line.

I also liked how you put the lyrics to 'Bring Me to Life' in the chapter. Very nice touch. The scene of Aros' revelation was also quite stunning. ^_~

However, one thing bugged me - a paragraph in the chapter was repeated. Kind of confusing, until I figured out what it was...but no biggie. Nothing could make reading Court of Souls not enjoyable!

I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE FINAL CHAPTER. I'll sit here at my computer until it comes, and I'll probably squeal in hyper joy when I see it on my screen.

I've been waiting over a year for this, and I'm definitely ready! ^_^
Hikarigirl18
4/19/05 . chapter 63
O.O Evil Cliffies! But so awesome! Must Have Last Chapter!
Bilbo-sama
4/19/05 . chapter 63
Wow...just...wow...@_@

I can't say anything that can describe how great this chapter is.

Basically, you are the master of us all. *grovels*

Anyway, continue please! ^_^
Bears Love Tourists
4/19/05 . chapter 63
Beautiful.

Sora's going to join with Aros and become whole again in the next chapter, right? I really can't see this ending any other way; I couldn't ever since I realized that the bad guy was Sora's heart.

Eh, well, guess I'll find out in the next chapter, ne? I'm looking forward to it!
Wanderer D
4/19/05 . chapter 63
Hey!

Ah! Now you've got me worried! What is going to happen? I have a love/hate relationship with these kind of stories! On the brink of creation... or destruction... what will happen to Yami and Ranma and Kairi? Will they all get back home? I can't wait to see! ¬_¬ but, then again, there's not much I can do about it.

^_^ I will eagerly await the next chapter!
fle
4/17/05 . chapter 62
Wow, I was wondering when Riku would make his apperance! I'm so happy you finaly updated, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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