That was a Marvelous extention of this scene. Its like you could read Kara's thoughts on the show and write them down with such natural fluidly. I am impressed. Please do more scenes like this. A jump back and forth between point of views would be absolutely awesome.

well i'm at least interested to see what else you can add to this. it flows really well and comes across as natural and in character

YES! So good :) I will be waiting with baited breath for an update (because I'm sort of guessing this isn't the end :)
Write-To-You

So good! Hope you continue to write for this pairing.

Wtf it's the same exact thing as the episode?

Update please

Loving it honey.. Great job!

Please continue

Really good;)Please contiune!

Aawwww I love this