I really loved it! I hope you add more chapters to this story, very original!

That was too sweet, how cute they both have abandonement issues. This was really good and soo well-written.

enjoyed this. leaves you imagining where it will go next.

Like? Nah. Love? Nah. ABOSOLUTELY POSITIVLEY ADORE? Yeah, that might describe it. I liked how you had Winn humour in there too. :)

Is this a one shot cause omg I want more

Very good job! Quite an amusing article. I like the pig latin added in and big sister Alex prying answers out of Kara. I hope you continue to write more.

This is a terrific story! The scene with Kara and Alex is so cute. Spilling the beans seemed like a very sisterly Alex thing to do. I am surprised super hearing doesn't get them all in to trouble more. Now I am just waiting for the "we'll talk about it later" scene that I am begging you to write.

Omg I love this I am so happy right now lol. Im just like, I ship it!

You've got quite the handle on these two! Their Kiss was so damn adorable and Mon-El mumbling "Yup, absolutely beautiful" while drifting off to sleep.. Sigh.. I hope you keep writing about these two!

Ouch that story hurt. Although I see how it might go.

I REALLY liked this. Cute and sweet. Would love for it to continue, but if not, great on it's own!

Another awesome piece. I couldn't stop laughing when Kara and Alex were using pig latin. Great job! :)

moooooorrrrrrre please lol

Awwww, I really love this. Please continue!

love it please continue it not much mon el and Kara stories out there