I loved how you used the images from the 10th Kingdom's opening sequence. It was a wonderful tie-in.

This was great! I truly enjoyed the way you used the opening credits of the movie when Mazarin went to New York. Truly inspired. You really know the characters and wrote them so well I could still see them as I did in the movie. I loved them both and plan rereading them often. I never even read the first book which is something I never do!
Do you plan on writing a 4th in the series with Xian taking over? With the way Kia said she would know when her sisters bargain had been broken and would take over. Please please do! I will watch for it.
Keep up the good work and know that I among others would be willing to support your efforts to see these published for everyone.

See? SEE? This begs, no DEMANDS, a sequel! How can you just end there? And never tell us the rest of the story? Don't be cruel, you have to come back and do a third story. Please?

Love that Virginia faced her fears and is starting to be a mom to Anthony, finally finding her way.

I love, LOVE this story. It had great characterization, skillful plotting, suspense, the good guys winning in end, interesting mythology, and really good writing. I'm favoriting it and really, really hope you'll come back and write more 10th K fanfic for us.

Wow, a bittersweet chapter! LOVED all the happy endings, and the glimpses into the future. Burly and Felicity getting together cracked me up. Nice ending for Timka.

This made me sad for Virginia:

"I'm just a waitress again," she said starting to cry. "I was Leaf's Second. And I had Cinderella's magic shoes. And now I'm just a waitress again." I hated that she had to give both of those things up, but the ring seems to indicate she's going to be great without them. Also, I'd love to see her get Cinderella's shoes for good.

Loved that Raphaela called Tony "Father." So sweet!

I'm sad that Snow White's gone now. I loved her guiding them! And I'm a little worried about what will happen to Raphaela. Will she still be a staff? I hope she'll at least be able to be around for Anthony.

I have loved this story, and I am really sad at the thought of it being over. Especially since I see you haven't written any more 10th Kingdom fics since this one. I don't want to leave the gang-old and new. I want to see what's going to happen next, want to see how Matilde and Tony get along, what happens with Kai, see Virginia and Wolf raising Anthony and Timka becoming his friend, want to see Rose and Wendell having kids, Garnet learning about Ichabod watching over her...and so much more. Please write more!

"My bargain with Xian is broken. She will sense my passing. If anything happens, you're the only one who can hold her back." "You must find your own destiny," Chu'Mana said. "But ask yourself about the jinn's words. Was he saying you must prove yourself by being loyal to Jennica…Or something else?" Both of these quotes seem to point toward the story between the three siblings and Irem not being over. I really hope you plan to do a sequel to address these, as I don't imagine they'll get tied up with this story. Also, I demand a happy ending for Kai and Jennica! :)

Hmmm...it seems to me that the barrier needs to come down in order for the wolves and bears to fight a war together-against Xian, I hope. The story of her, Kai, and Chu'Mana seems not yet finished. Hope that Kai and Jennica get their happy ending. He's given up so much, waited so long.

Well...I'm sure Timka is acting for Wolf's best interest, so that was good. The rest was kinda ominous, especially Gavrilo being made king. I thought Snow White or someone would be by to corral him before now, since they know he sent Victor. Disappointed he's not a bear, but I guess it's for the best, since he's evil.

Sammy the toad! Baby the Dragon! Felicity! The unicorns! The trolls! I love when everyone comes together to fight for the good guys!

Hm...if they needed three older ones, I wonder why Virginia's ring couldn't have helped. It has to be pretty old, since it pre-dates the magical barrier. I hate to see Matilde lose her crystal (especially since she's also going to be losing her staff)-that might be a real blow to her power. I am intrigued by the crystal's backstory, though. Hopefully we get more of that later.

Ah, so that's what's been going on with Red! I wondered if she might not just be faking being under the spell, because of what she went through last time, getting tortured by the trolls. I like this much better. I like Ichabod, and I'm happy he found the journal of Red's father so she could learn what her name should've been and see that he cared for her. Wish Ichabod would let Wolf tell her he's there.

Yes-the spirit of the crystal comes into play! I knew it would be important later!

I can't believe Barron actually stood up to Victor. Didn't see that coming. I wish I was more sorry that he's dead, but at least he can't cause any more trouble.

The huntsman's crossbow-I'd forgotten all about that! Cool that it was actually used for good this time.

And finally-an enchanted bear! Yay! I hope we get to see more about him and Maria Thompson. I'm very curious to learn more about the enchanted bears and see them fight beside the wolves, their brothers.

Loved that Cinderella's slippers came to Virginia to transport her around the kingdoms. I'm hoping that if Leaf Fall's daughters don't step up to the plate, maybe Virginia will be next in line to be Queen. LF did say that the elves wouldn't let a human rule them UNLESS they were of historic importance or had great magic. With the slippers, Virginia has the latter, and she was already of historic importance.

I'm so curious as to how much plotting you do beforehand. Do you completely outline your stories and then start writing, or just write it as it comes? They're always so carefully plotted out. It's really impressive.

I was also glad to meet Rapunzel (she's always been a favorite of mine) and that she's suspicious of Gavril. Hope someone will take notice of that.

LOL I actually liked Virginia's grandma here, threatening to use her stun gun on Mazarin.

I wasn't sure who/what "Con Edison" was. A power company, maybe?

Well. Lots going on here. I like that Rapheala's secret is out and that she beat the nurse over the head, LOL. Mazarin's plan seems to be going into effect, which can only be bad news. And that Gavrilo-I KNEW something was going on with him, but I kinda thought that he might be an enchanted bear. This is way worse! I love the trolls coming to offer their services, though, in the hopes of "better shoes". LOL