Reviews for The Forbidden Garden
TooManyShipsI'llSink chapter 4 . 8/1/2017
Cuteness
TheAlienHeart chapter 4 . 7/31/2017
Well that was very sweet of Rae Rae! Poor Bb and his Terra related issues.

Nice job.
Mangaka Shuzen chapter 4 . 7/31/2017
As awesome as always!
Golem XIV chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Beautifully done as usual, Ava. And certainly relatable to me; it was not once I had to do the same thing as Raven had to, and for similar reasons.

Thank you for this.
disnerdmama chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
I'm addicted to your writing. I'm always so excited when you update, but then so mad at myself for reading it as fast as I do. I need to saver it more lol
RPGPersona chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
This was a little bittersweet. It is sad seeing Beast Boy put his body through such an ordeal every year on the anniversary of Terra's death. It is like he is beating himself up over the fact he couldn't save her by having other people beat him up.

It is sweet that Raven took the effort to find out what was going on and make sure he got back in one piece every year. It is good that Raven feels Beast Boy is getting better. Some wounds can take a long time to heal, but it feels like Raven's presence is having a positive effect on Beast Boy when he is at his lowest.
bearhow chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
Yet another I had completely forgotten about! Beautifully done as always. I never thought that gar would retrace his and terras steps but there ya go.
AliceCambio chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
Lovely and sad. Very good.
Mangaka Shuzen chapter 3 . 3/21/2017
Wow I love it! So simple yet so amazing!
RPGPersona chapter 3 . 3/12/2017
I don't want to even know what happened to lead to this moment. Raven certainly seems to have taken quite the beating. I'm not even sure there was any point to it beyond wanting to inflict harm.

Good to see that Beast Boy put aside his thoughts and feeling to prioritize Raven's well being, since she really seemed to need it.

I notice Beast Boy said a nosebleed, not his nosebleed. Since the blood is dried, it has been there awhile. Perhaps Beast Boy went a little wild in his search?

I am guessing the team split up to find her, since Beast Boy was thinking Robin would find her.

The important thing is that Raven was found in one piece, and Beast Boy was able to extract her.
disnerdmama chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
So sweet, and angsty, I love it!
i-scream-for-bbrae chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
That was sweet! I'm glad Gar got to play hero for once, he deserves it.
Golem XIV chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
I love these. They're like chocolates, quick and sweet and tasty and each filled with something different, yet all wonderful. Thank you!
RPGPersona chapter 2 . 2/19/2017
Just goes to show that everyone has a breaking point. A point where the stress and negative emotions become too much and they just snap. Today Gizmo was the catalyst for Beast Boy snapping. Was Gizmo the icing on a cake that has been building for some time, or did Gizmo just hit the right notes? Either way, the result is clear, and I am sure Gizmo will be feeling it in the morning.

Maybe making it sound like he is a liability is not the best way to check on how Beast Boy is doing there Raven. It did let him vent a bit, and Raven could only agree with him after he finished. She even brought down the sarcastic walls after Beast Boy finished. She also didn't push him away when he gave her a gratitude hug. I wonder if this scene cause Raven to look at Beast Boy in a different light?
Mangaka Shuzen chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
Wow I was actually in the middle of writing a fix like this0.0 you did it well though! I love it!
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