YAAAY AN UPDATE! I hope the next chapter is soon to follow! I can only brainstorm for weeks to guess what will happen next! (jk)

Oh! I'm interested in where this story's headed! Usually its Ed the Bad Guys want and Al's the hostage, and a reversal of this fandom trope is not something I realised I wanted until now! Good luck with the next chapter!

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What's happening to my boys DX
Love it XD
Hope to see an update soon XD

Gah! Really?! Need more!

This story...it intrigues me. You must continue it.

And so the plot thickens! Me like xD

OMG! I love it!
Hope to see an update soon XD

This is starting to get serious and exciting! ;D Next chapter here we come!

Hey, so I'm pretty interested in your story thus far, I haven't found anything wrong with, so I'm pretty optimistic. Good job, keep up the good work.

Aw, no perspective from Ed or Al? D:
...was it ambitious of me to have expected Mustang to know everything already? I still feel let down. XD
Thanks for writing, I hope you update soon! :)

Gah! You update and leave it a cliffhanger? Write more please!

That's it? Gah!

AHH! How could you do this! I'm kidding, I love cliffhangers. they're pretty great. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Yaaaaay. This story is alreay action packed! Oh Mustang... what are you gonna get into?

The plot so far sounds great! I definitely agree with calling it an intro, or maybe a teaser? I'm interested in where you'll take this, good luck!