| Reviews for Mission: Capture Ayano's Heart |
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Guest chapter 11 . 7/27 möther.,,...,,... e,...,...feed me the good shit |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/26 Love this story so much, my favorite YS fanfic so far, hope you continue |
Peanut chapter 11 . 7/21 soon for meeeee |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/20 Luv it and cats and chairs |
Netharia chapter 11 . 7/15 I got really excited thinking this got updated when it was just the app downloading the story. Rip Hope's and dreams. I'm a mobile user so I can't vote on the poll. Hopefully you're doing well and will continue. I'm afraid you'll drop the story and story will die the death of a thousand other fanfics, and at a interesting part too. Glad you appreciated my first review! Carry on writer! |
sailorbunny055 chapter 11 . 6/24 please update! i'm so excited for more! c: i love this story! |
selin3838 chapter 11 . 6/22 Wow... I love your fanfic, I do not know if my English is good, but I look forward to you continue |
LalaLeanne14 chapter 1 . 6/5 So Kamo complicated is a rock rock star totg iibhJakemni Io u on ohogn. make me me lovecIud daddy's, ijii lm |
Belle Licot chapter 11 . 5/19 Hi! I just wanted to tell you that this story is very well written! I love how you took all the time and effort to build up a character's development with their relationship with Ayano, It's hard to find that quality in a few of the fanfics I've read, I'm not saying that they're bad, its just that its lacking the much needed time to let the characters bond and it comes out as a rushed, unlike yours. What I really like about your story is that its a unique and refreshing concept, it's not just Ayano blindly chasing after Taro, instead you made her killings for a different motive ; for money that she gains from Info-kun. I really like how you made his character more rounded and descriptive, not just selling information from panty shots, as well as making him Ayano's "childhood friend" which makes his backround a lot more interesting. For Ayano, I like her calm and collective personality, as well as smart and calculating, blunt and formal, all the while not losing her being emotionless and apathetic. As for the other characters, they are very well in-character which is what i really like about this story, even if the whole plot is tweaked and altered, you still managed to keep them close to their personalities. Lastly, I really like those chapters where Ayano interacts with Megamo, its so interesting and the dialogue is so well written, it keeps all the supense and thrill going in the story. All in all, this is one of the best stories I've read, I do hope that you continue your work, it has been a while since you updated, anyways, Kudos to you and the time and effort you have put into this story. I hope I did'nt take too much of your time, Thank you, and have a great day! |
yananon chapter 2 . 5/16 So, I’m rereading this while I wait for an update and I just realized something. Is Ran Domu’s name ‘Random’? |
tsunderecherub chapter 2 . 4/17 *and also about the murdering stuff *someone at least feel suspicious? *responsibility out of the murders? sorry for the typos... my hand can get shaky at times |
tsunderecherub chapter 2 . 4/17 wait... I think I noticed some strange things in yandere simulator itself... about the incinerator shouldn't anyone be at least concerned about the frequent usage of the incinerator? and also the times when you can only use that? since the incinerator isn't something that most schools have and also so about the murdering stuff... shouldn't someone at there at least feel suspicions.. also about akademi high... since there are cases of murders aren't parents appalled by such news? a lot of disappearances occurred right? shouldn't they be at least on edge about that? and shouldn't the government take responsibility out if the murders? honestly... this game can get contrived at times... especially if it's just for the player's convenience... like some animes out there.. like they need to add something for the plot's sake... not for the characters.. this is a game after all... but I love your story... can't wait for further updates |
tsunderecherub chapter 1 . 4/17 everything? really? OH I get it... she's too great to not even have a hobby |
TouchMyCakeIKillYou chapter 1 . 4/13 Please Update Soon, I Really Like Your Work Here. |
Jurie Yang chapter 11 . 4/2 Aww poor Osano, i honestly dont know who to ship ayano with, they're all shippable hahaha, but so far the kizano and ayano's interactions are my favorite, and the most nervewrecking and also had me-the reader, put to an edge was Mido Rana, seriously, who wouldn't love a hot, smexy and mysterious teacher?lolol jk jk. Osano is such a cinnamon roll, male tsunderes are just too adorable! but woah, i just finished the story and i would never have thought that one day i'd love the Cooking Club president, even with koumi's art, seriously. I dont know who to vote for now huhu, Megamo/Ayano's interaction were intense! I'm looking forward for more of them, I wonder how'll Osoro/Ayano interactions gonna go? But still, a great story so far. You got me hooked! and im left wanting more! haha, but still. Take your time! no need to rush, thank you for bestowing upon us such a wonderful story! sorry for my bad english lolol |