I would like to see the end of this...why no continuation?

I just finished a lovely evening reading "Enticement". You are a great writer! Thank you for sharing. I love the way the love story unfolded. Good job!

This was such a lovely story that I was unfortunantly enticed (irony?) to stay up till 4 in the morning with my fixation on finishing it. But it really was that engaging and the characters were just so sympathetic and easy to relate too. You really felt a connection and interest in how it would turn out for their well-being, as well as concern when time and time again it went wrong. I must say you used a number of classic tropes that come up in fanfiction often, but rather than seeming warn and tired they were sweet and enjoyable. So very well done job on this particular fic!

That was wonderful.

There is absolutely nothing I can say that will justify quite how much I loved this. Its like, one of the BEST fics i've read, or at least, one of the only ones thats kept my awake ALL night reading. Seriously, I got home from a long shift at 8.30, and read till about 3 am, reading every word, and then read a few favorite bits twice! Its really well written, and makes you want to read more. I' ll definitely be reading more of your stuff, and hoping you write more Jareth/Sarah! Thanks for posting this, its really fantastic! :D

This was an extremely well written story. If you were to make a real book with their life in the underground and such I would do whatever it took to buy it. Is there a sequal to this? I absoultly love this story and The Labringth, this story is bound to stay on my mind for a long time.

Thank you for writing it :)

Wow. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful work of art with us. I read your story in one evening, and I must say, I don't regret procrastinating doing homework in exchange for reading your lovely story.

-YT

Truthfully, I'm not sure what to say about this story. I loved the romantic feel of the whole story, but it just wasn't my cup of tea I suppose. I hate the fact that you killed off her family for one- from what I can tell it didn't have much impact on the story aside from giving them something to share with each other. I think that you could have expanded more about 'Mark', it just felt too incomplete for me. I don't know. Also, you could have given a little more focus on the Labyrinth- I was really curious about it and how the inhabitants were doing.

Aside from that little bit, I believe that this was a good genuine romance story. Good work!

Absolutely awesome story! I love your character progression and the fact that Sarah has actually progressed from a immature teen to an adult in her thoughts and actions. It is rather irritating to read a characterization of a woman over 25 still acting like a 15 year old. The tension, both emotional and sexual is gripping and the "temptation talk" was titillating in the extreme! What I wouldn't give for a Jareth to sweet talk ME like that!

I will definitely be putting you on my favs list!

I have only recently gained an interest in perusing Labyrinth fanfiction, but I find that I am awed by this piece. Thank you so much for sharing such a treasure. Your story had many loose ends to tie, but in the end you managed to weave it all together in a manner befitting a professional author. Congratulations on such a brilliant success. Good luck in all future writing endeavors. EK!

This was sweet. Not exactly how I pictured Jareth or the Labyrinth but it was cute.

I just read the last chapter at Digital Quill and I loved it. To be exact, I loved the whole story. Kept me up into the middle of the night, but that was worth it.

I think I have to try your other stories as well. ;)

I find your fic to have given a significant contribution to Labyrinth fandom and have added it to my archive, Labyrinth Classics.

If you have any suggestions for fics that are not on the list but you consider to be Labyrinth classics give me a ring.

Personal note:

I think what makes this story so great is how you humanize Jareth. In many other stories his enigmaticness is part of his charm, but here you have them work through their troubles as if it is a real relationship. Kudos.

Looking forward to the rest, must go to bed.

Another GREAT story!

I was sad to see that there was no Epilogue or sequel to AND but I was delighted to find this story in your profile. It really was wonderful and so unlike your other. This one happened all Above and the other all Below and the deaths of Sarah's family was dealt with wonderfully. I liked that she taught Jareth about Christmas and proved to him that not all women are cruel.

The seduction... WOW! That was a really intense three and a half minutes! I've not read anything like that and I was praying Sarah wouldn't give in as strongly as I was pushing her forward to bridge the gap between them. Jareth certainly has a way with words, doesn't he? ;o)

There was a LOT of tea drinking in this story. That is in no way a bad thing. LOL I just thought I'd let you know that I have been guzzling tea for the past two days while reading this story because of it. Initially, I ignored the craving but I finally gave in. I am now down to 6 tea bags of Lady Grey and need to go to the market for more. Lets just say that I am glad it wasn't brownies they were constantly indulging in -my waistline wouldn't be able to handle it. LOL As it is, I also added a tin of butter cookies to the shopping list. Just a funny little anecdote I thought you might get a kick out of. :o)

I am sad to see that near all of your stories are for HP. I know it's been years but maybe you wouldn't mind giving Labyrinth another visit. Your JS stories are wonderful and I hope you visit them again.

Keep Writing!