Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Alain ;-;- so sweet wow... hes just a softie... but arent we all when it comes to Mairin?
She's like a female version of me :0 except shes way cuter and more clumsy that its allowed to be legal
Her excitement for the first date is just... i want to adopt her. And keep her safe from the vile of this world. But alain is doing a pretty good job at it! Dang why cant i blast burn anyone i like...
Savory your youth at 19... really Alain?
Dang Connor has been hilarious and annoying in the anime, so in this version while i cant blast burn him directly since what would be murder and i have read it somewhere that murder is illegal, i would LOVE to smash his face in with a bat c:
Sorry... slight anger issue...
Assholes aside, her first date did turn out well huh? Second first date, but same thing, asked out by her crush nonetheless x) assuming your story each has a different timeline, i hope it still stands true
It was such a good read ;-;-;; i havent found a single one that i dont love, boss you're good at this :0

I think you mean to say edible. How did you come up with Mairin's surname? also, there's no u in mascara. Other than that, this was truly adorable.

wow.. how come this didn't come in my email.

I love this ship :)

nice job ;)

So heartwarming that my fanboy insides blew up!

Ooooooooh, you really did a great job making me hate Connor and his friends. I enjoyed reading the part where Alain was toying with him in the battle before having Charizard completely obliterate his Pokémon. I felt so awful for Mairin, my child didn't deserve that at all ;_; but Alain was there for her when she needed it, and I loved that so much.

Well...
The ending was slightly...not up to the mark in my opinion, but that was a seriously grt 1-shot!

Poor Mairin! Nobody deserves to be pranked like that. Alain is very well suited for the role of Concerned Person with a Crush. . . for lack of better words on my part XD I loved this too much for my own good