It's very good, beautiful and well written!

*stares*
*resumes breathing again*

THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! SO MUCH EMOTION AND FEELING (EMOTION? FEELING? WHAT'S A MAZOKU DOING WITH THOSE?) AND I *LOVE* IT.
Must...fav...this...
*runs to fav it*

Wow, this is pretty dark, and deep, and depressing... MV, you convey emotions extremely well. This isn't the kinda ficcie I like, but I liked this because of the quality of the writing! Great job! Depressing though... *sniffles*

Eya, Fluffyness! Fluffyness! Fluffyness! *Sighs* I'm really a dark depressing fic kind of person, but oh, I love this. I've never seen any Gaav/Valgaav except in Mazoku All Day, but finnaly, I have found more! You are my savior! Thank you, Thank You,Thank you, Thank You,Thank you, Thank You,Thank you, Thank You,Thank you, Thank You! (this is one of the best parings to annoy my friends with) I think you did this pretty well, and the only sugjestion I have is... Write more!

Good Idea Huh? Please, write more?

Excellent work as always, kupo! _ It was sad enough to even make me cry, keep up the good work, kupo! _

Oh, my, this is absoutely beautiful. And so painful at the same time. And it definitely makes Valgaav/Gaav seem completely natural.

*sobs* That was so smeggin' LOVERLY! You really understand Gaavie-kins, it's like you're right inside his head!Gaav: O_o;; I hope not! *grabs a steel helmet*And you wrote this all in one night? Incredible. Absolutely amazing. I think me fave line is "Loving and hating him forever." Such a paradox, like a warm and cold front colliding and creating a whirlwind of emotions Gaav doesn't understand! O, I'm poetic! XD ANYHOW! Great job once again!Gaav: She's making us suffer.. where's the happy ending? CURSE YOU! Oh hush!