By Jon I presume you mean Jonathan Archer?

Or did I get it wrong?

Good chapter anyway.

Something serious going on that Soval seems a little "nervous"?

Good start! Definitely curious to see where it leads. You have a little mystery going surrounding T’Wen; teasing just enough of the character to rouse curiosity. Interested in meeting T’Wen and learning more of her background. :)

Good start.

But I recognize this chapter from before.

Have you rewritten it?

Dear readers. Sensara's story: Dear Ambassador Soval was one of the best ones I'd read concerning our next favorite Vulcan( after Spock of course). The last short paragraph in chapter 2 of this story was may idea about closing up this loose end, because to best of my knowledge, no one had ever figured out how Genie had been inducted into the Maco's. But despite that, she became even more a desirable bride and friend to her A'dun. While a grandparents form of revenge is always grand children, it would seem bonding Jon to an exceptional Vulcan lady should be sweet revenge indeed.