What an absolutely gorgeous tale of love, loss and forgiveness. Well done the story is a gem, I fking loved it.

this is making me feel stuff...

now that Jaune has popped the cherry, he has to have a guys night with Sun and Neptune. Having a couple cold ones and watching sports.

I finally go around to reading this story and I have to say, I really liked it! The conflicts between the characters felt real and the resolution to those conflicts were genuine, well set-up and satisfying. You did a great job balancing the time each character got, which was impressive and they way time-skips were handled was excellent (as in I as a reader never got lost). So yeah, that was a fantastic read that left me happy and satisfied at the end but also wishing there was more. Great job!

Wow. That was honestly one of the best RWBY fan fictions I’ve read so far. Good mix between humor and seriousness. Great job. Thanks for this story, and hope you keep on making more.

Danm. tha was kinda epic actually. Great chapter

Nice

Hot danm. That was both fluffy and great.

I find the change in perspective a great thing. Not many stories have it.

Nice start

Now this was something of a hidden gem indeed. Such interesting, human, unique interactions... I'm genuinely floored.

OK this needs a sequel seriously! A Soul bond story that doesn't have the man. The idea that Blake Neo mad Pyrrha all experienced Jaune in three ways. Making their love for him stronger. I mean holy cow. No doubt their are issues. Jumping from V2s ending to the finals of Vytal festival was jarring. To say he the least BUT. OH MY GOD the pay off was so worth it!

Harem story done right. Jaune isn't some super stud who can convince every girl into bed. No he works for it. He fights, he's earnest, honest dorky knight. You really showcased why how the dense and Naive Jaune. Can warm people to him if they get past his personality quirks.

And your selection was superb. Pyrrha and Blake have common ground in lonleness. But then you spend time focusin on Neo. And make her just as lonely. Then you have Jaune support and build a relationship with each of them. All though you did stick to canon with ARKOS.

Personally I felt like Blake needed a little more exposition and time with Jaune. BUT because you filled in Blakes experience with Neo and Pyrrha its still believeable that a crush can become love. She litterally experienced Pyrrha's pining and Neo's devotion. Good work.

This is beautiful. My heart, it feels so good. I have tears of joy! Thank you!

tools to make* such - You had such a good streak, aside from using improper paragraph dialogue splitting this whole story, but how the hell did you miss an "e"?

Story was pretty good, if not a tiny bit rushed, and a bit lacking in depth of the romance side of it. Overall it was a decent read.

This is definitely one of my favorite RWBY fanfics that I've had the pleasure to read. I binged the entire story over the course of 3 days. Thanks for sharing your story with us and keep up the awesome work!