The concept was cute enough, but the abrupt style of writing and the way things were rushed caught me off guard. Elongating the reunion between Mao & Rei - & the romantic scene - would have drew me in a lot more. Mao plopping down on Rei's lap & kissing him out of the blue struck me as being OOC. But like I said - or rather, typed - before, cute concept. I liked the idea of returning to a mutual place that symbolized their adoration. Keep up the good work, and remember, a few well-placed descriptive words can make a world of difference. (& I do realize this story was written some time back, so maybe you've realized this & I'm just babbling.) :)

GAH! x.x

I read a ReiMariah fic. Willingly. AH! *dies*

ANYWAYS!

I'm really happy that I did read this! It's short, and sweet and oh so luffable! ^_^

Hey this is a really cute story you made.I really liked it.But if you make some other stories do you think you could send me one on my Email?Because I am really in love with these stories.

Best wishes Ashanti!

Hey Rika! It's been WAY too long since I've seen you! No wonder too. Thanks for your review too. ^_^

realy like it "continue"

^_^ miaou

s64- Aw... that wuz cute!^-^

yami s64-speakfor yourself!

s64- cummon even you have to say you liked it!

yami s64- NEVER

s64- 'scuse me (ties ys64 to chair) Rei/Mariah4eva!

Kawaii, one-shot! Gotta read ppls, if ya happen to run across my review! ~^

Aw... kawaii! I hope you write more Beyblade stuff soon!

Chibi Rei: Uh-huh. Otherwise she'll be driven mad by yaoi.

Chibi Mao: And we'll have to deal with her.

nice one don't give up the nice fic writing

(sorry adout my young sis she is new in ffn)

OMG! That was so cute! That was perfect! I'd give it more than tow thumbs, but I don't have anymore.

Your fic was great. Keep it up.

Nice fic! keep it up!

r/m foreva

Shyanne: As one would say, good. As I would say-

Mini Me: Terrible.

Shyanne: No way! I say awsome! Rei/Mariah 4eva!

Mini Me: Kai/ Rei 4eva!

Shyanne: Excuse me while I kill my mini self!