What the fuck

As a High Elf player, I looked at this fic from a Dark Elf perspective, and found you captured the tension and true horror the Dark Ones are capable of.

I used to work at Games Workshop, so I know that what you wrote here, was the very essense as to what was hinted in the Dark Elf Army Book.

Yes, they are sick, and yes, you captured the rituals very well...after all...Malekith must have put Eltharion through horror to scar him mentally as well as physically...

I give it 9 out of 10 (not 10, because I'm a High Elf player! Only kidding! =^_^=)

Amazing. I can't believe that someone else has thought of Eltharion and Dark Elf slash, I thought it was just me! Besides, the way GW drone on about how many "unspeakable tortures" he was put through when captured by Malekith almost implies something sexual; so we have an excuse! ;)

Seriously though, you have an amazing ability to capture the different characters of the elves, High or Dark. The *naughty* scenes were great fun and deliciously angsty. You should be proud of your courage in writing up a WH slash tale, or indeed, writing up any kind of GW slash tale. Amazing, beautiful, engrossing and believable. You have a knack for such wonderfully twisted tales...I look forward to the next. I have always thought that Morathi made Eltharion her b*tch during captivity, seeing as that's the kind of thing she does best...

Malekith is so evil. Tied to a bed, reminds me of Chained...Sticking needles in his eyes. The guy is cruel.
I think you misunderstood me before, I didn't feel bade about readng the fic, I felt bad about laughing. (And about non con, doesn't it usually classify as R? That's why I was wondering.)
I'm not really following the story though. (I should probably actually play Warhammer, but I don't, so I *cough* don't understand much, this fic came semi-recced. I actually started reading because you mentioned flamers, the dumb species they are, on FA, and decided to read what they flamed.)

Again, a very well-written piece, if not as (writing-wise) beautiful as your first. You have a great ability to imagine things that will horrify and shock, and you are pushing the boundaries with commendable strength.
Ignore flamers: you rock.
PS: I have long since given up my High Elf Army. It was my first, but then when 6th edition came out, I stopped- now I flounder with my Wood Elves, vainly hoping that the new Army Book will be the next one out (stupid Brettonians) and also trying to consider an Empire Army...
BRILLIANT WORK!

Well, I think this should probably be R rated, as it contains some assault and abit of non con, but all in all it was pretty good. I nearly laughed when I read this line "-Pathetic elf, rather beautiful though, I wonder what he's like it bed?- ", (because I mean, really, he's so arrogant) although I did feel slightly bad about it when I read the ending...

I loved it Morgan, slash is my god, hail slash.
Noorxx
p.s Your were right that nasty flame you got was really funny, shame he/she didn't leave and email adress.

u know me and this is good no exelent and u also know that i like slash but ew.
no i like it but ew.
im still ur friend dont worry but ew.
my-dark-matierials

you aint fuckin human tell me where u live and ill murder you sick bastard FAGOT/bastard/asshole/loser/gay/bumfucker/brother fucker/

My response to medevilmouse's review:

Hello medevilmouse.

This is NOT about how many points of Dark Elves I have, this is about writing a fanfiction. If I want to beat Eltharion to a pulp then I have as much right as you have to kill Malekith, this is fanfiction so you have no right to tell me what I can put up unless you're the owner of this site. If you don't like what I'm writing then read something else! No one's holding a bolter to your head and telling you "Read this!"

Incidentally I have about 2,0 points in Dark elves but I paint more than I game. If you think that 210 points of high elves is impressive then you must live under a stone.

I am not considerate of High elf players because I think that the people reading this prefer Dark Elves, the reference to Malekith puts most players off.

I have not put this fanfiction up to be bad mouthed by some high elf player with zero IQ who has no grasp of capitals OR grammer, and thinks "The Space Things" and "lalalala" are good titles and summaries.

If you think that what you wrote is constuctive and/or makes you look intelligent, then think again.

Skull Bearer.

you should be a little more considerate of people who play high elfs. even more so of those who could beat you in the real game. Yes id be refering to myself. how about you e-mail me how many points you have. i have at least 210 playable. so shut your mouth.

Hmm...very good writing, if the content was rather...sadistic? Great, though! Malekith. I admit he is a good (good as in well-created) character, though I do not like him, or the Dark Elves very much, being one of those High Elf 'Pansies' that likes Eltharion. Hmm...why can't we all exist in peace, love and harmony? *cough* Yeah, right. Keep writing Warhammer fics, you are a brilliant writer, and capture the evil of the Druchii perfectly.