This is really good! I think I know who the to guys are :) Hmm...Dunno really what the story's gonna be about, but then I haven't really played many Final Fantasy games. And yeah. I wanna find out though! So I hope you have faster updates then I do.

plaese update soon i love it.

it's so well written.'(^o^)'

DA! NO IT'S OVER! I MUST KNOW WHO THE TWO MEN ARE AND WHO'S THE SECOND MAN'S SON! :( lol but the little part with 'The first man' 'The second man' 'The first man' 'The second man' lol it was funny... But I understand why you did that... I still wanna know who they are... I MUUST KNOW! Oh well anywho, great ficcy anyway... :P Keep of writing and I'll keep reading, you can count on that! Byes!