| Reviews for Fire, Flowers, and Wands |
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AsianGirl88 chapter 6 . 6/30/2017 I'm sorry but as I was reading this I couldn't help but think; 'where are the quotation marks? and some of the dialogue is missing too. this work needs a beta.' such work, ruined by simple errors, and not spelling mistakes |
Fiery Ronin chapter 1 . 5/5/2015 Please use quotation marks to indicate dialogue please! |
AKA PsychicGirl chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 Um your story doesn't have any quotation marks. I was very confused as to when they were talking |
trninjakiller chapter 2 . 10/14/2013 Make sure to put quotations on a statement a character makes if you dont it gets confusing |
shadow chapter 12 . 11/10/2010 tenknicly no his dad is human and sos his mom his anstor is rezin the demon lord. |
Serenity Moon2 chapter 21 . 11/9/2010 It's sad to see that this story was discontinued, I was kinda enjoying it. Oh well, it happens to the best of them I suppose. |
Serenity Moon2 chapter 7 . 11/8/2010 Yes, quotation marks! This makes it so much easier to understand when someone else is talking. And I'm still liking this story. Kurama just had to show off with the plants didn't he. |
Serenity Moon2 chapter 2 . 11/7/2010 Hmm...I dunno if all the chapters are like this or not since I've only read two chapters so far, but I was wondering where were the quotation marks to signal when someone was talking. I noticed that in this chapter you had something to show that Hiei was taking to Kurama telepathically, so I was wondering if you could use something to show that someone was talking. It tends to get a little confusing when there is nothing that shows that someone is talking, it tends to blend all together. Other than that, I'm enjoying the story so far. Don't usually see Hiei go to Hogwarts as a student, so this should be interesting. |
Tsukika chapter 13 . 3/22/2009 YAYY Dragon Knights! um...I own all of the volumes and nadil, and his minions do die so, so far that series seems to be correct.(at this moment I'm only at chp 13) |
Tsukika chapter 2 . 3/22/2009 You have a formatting issue with your "quotation marks". Can you please fix it? It makes things hard to follow. |
kitsuneluvuh chapter 12 . 9/1/2008 Eh, I'm sure other people have already pointed it out, but I love giving information, so... *shrugs* Raizen's not Yusuke's dad, more like his great great great (not sure how many greats, readlly) grandpa. Like, the demon blood was introduced into Yusuke's line about 500 years ago from the story. It was just waiting for a body that could handle the power in contained. Yusuke's really only just a little bit demon, but the blood's so strong that it's as if he is a half demon. And Puu turns into this beautiful, giant blue phoenix-like animal. :D :D Lol... |
Songbird of the End chapter 7 . 8/31/2008 Yay quotation marks! |
hitokiri battousai chapter 1 . 8/28/2008 ha ha ha! hiei mad! hiei squish bug! that was so funny! lolz ~*HB*~ |
Yoru Hana1 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008 Hogwart is a type of plant, it's of the lily family if I remember right. If anyone would know that it would be Kurama. Then again he might just not know human world plants that well. |
lazy.aces chapter 21 . 5/12/2008 I am going to fucking kill you. If people did't like this story then how come there are 620 BLOODY REVIEWS? YOU BETTER CONTINUE IT OR I'LL PUT YOUR HEAD ON A STICK. *hugs K-Chan plushie* CONTINUE IT! |