Sort of sad...

Oh. Oh, poor Haku. He's so sad and Chihiro's so...young. She reminds me of Bran in the Dark is Rising series, after Merriman takes away his memories.

I loved that you had her remembering flickers but nothing more. That was an inspired move.

Excellent story, and excellent ending. It fits the mood of this piece.

This is fantastic. (In a very, very sad way.) I love some of the imagery you've used, it's very beautiful and makes the story seem almost 3D (If thats possible).

Goodluck.

wow, fantastic

Aw...

I love this! A lovely, lovely story and it's a shame you don't have the review numbers you deserve. I liked how you used the paranthesis, it was different. Your story has a very tangible feel to it, very physical and present. It's also whimsical, in an almost sad way. But good sad, hopeful sad.
I hope you write more fic with these characters in the future. I'm adding this to my favorites list. :)

that's so you and good luck
kira~rie

This is THE best Spirited Away fic that I've ever read! It's so incredibly pretty... I love the way you wrote it, the strange tense helped the fealing of the story so well, it was fragmented and different and wonderful...

-Amberose

Keep writting!

I'd have to agree; this was a short, cute ficlet. _

interesting

It is cute i urge u to keep going it is really good

You're right, it was cute _. Just a one shot or is there more? Some beautiful images "Sand shifts like peach-colored snow" I like it.

Hiyo! This is a nice vignette. I did find the ending to be a bit abrupt, but maybe that's just me. I really enjoyed this fic. Keep up the good writing, cause sometimes there seems to be a lack of that.

love it already hurry update