Peter IS NOT A MUGGLEBORN. Would Voldemort let him work for him if he was?

Heeeeyyy, pretty good

Awesome

Good job. You have an excellent grasp on all four boys characters.

Wow! I have spent forever(ok that's an overstatement) looking for a decent Marauders era Fanfic and viola'! I finally find one! This was really well written and I spent the better part of 2 hours reading the entire thing(at 4 in the morning which should tell you how hooked I got to this) And now I'm off to read year two! So toodles and Keep up the wicked awesome work!

RebelRemusRules!

Hi, me again. Just wanted to say Slughorn would be the potions teacher. He talked all about Lily, and then it couldn't be that he came to Hogwarts after their first year. He was their when Voldemort was.

This is the BEST story I have read in all my time at this website. I think it is really great, and funny. I have only gotten to chapter 2, but I already know it's going to be a favorite!

i like this:) i'm gonna go see if you have a sequel now.

"I believe, my groggy, friend, that the correct question is, do you suppose the real world is ready for us?" Great line, sums up both Sirius's personality and the Marauders relationship up well. . . .

Hm . . . didn't catch any typos, and some good developments in this. I'm assuming it sets up for the next seven parts?

All in all, a very good story!

Cheers!

And another good chapter. I like the details about Andromeda, the exams, and the fact that it was Remus and Peter that went down the witch's hump first. Lily and James . . . amusing to say the least. . . .

A few minor grammar stuff- "intro" instead of "into", a few commas where they shouldn't be, minor grammar stuff like that.

Good chapter.

Cheers!

A lot happened in this chapter . . . so there's not much I can say definitively expcept that I enjoyed every bit of it.

What DID James do with the iguana? Love the fact that Pete's back! Hm . . . Rem, I think Sirius HAS memorized a book of strange things to say. . . . Lily's swelling James's head was pretty good, too.

A few minor typos- "the" instead of "they" and "1" instead of "!", but nothing big.

Love this story!

Cheers!

Fantastic chapter. Mrs. Norris hairless- I wish I could see that (though she'd mousy-furred in the books- I'm assuming they're two different cats?)! The prank . . . oh, MERLIN . . . imagining James in a dress. . . . Very, very funny. And Bellatrix and Sirius, to say the least, was amusing as well.

I'm assuming Peter's coming back next chapter?

I hope so!

Just really, really good! The only problem I saw was another nitpicky grammar thing (I promise I do it to everyone) "your" instead of "you're" and stuff like that.

Cheers!

Oh, very good. Glad to see Remus is turning out just fine. And the Polyjuice potion. . . . That's going to be interesting. Is Peter going to get back for it?

Very, very good. The discussion of the girls- that was funny. Madame Pince's reaction to the Dungbombs in the library was great. As usual, you just have a wonderful writing style.

Oh, and one thing I suspected but never really caught: it's spelled "Pomfrey", not "Pomfry". Seriously, though, if that's my only complaint, you're good.

Cheers!

Wow. You are GOOD. I like the way the title of the chapter matches so well with the storyline itself, and you;ve really put some depth into the story. James and Sirius were great!

I can't say much more than that, though you have Dumbledore down exceedingly well.

Lovely. Just a wonderful fic!

Cheers!

First part- intense. WHAT HAPPENED TO PETER? I like him in this fic- I want to know! You kept James and Sirius IC though, and with that much emotion running through the chapter I can understand it would be difficult. You ARE good at that!

Second part- funny. I loved the girls explanation of "girl talk" to the boys, lol. Um . . . let me think- if there was grammar I didn't catch it, and I love your discription/characerization throughout this. Yeah, that pretty well covers it.

Cheers!