It good! nice, new, and different! Love your style too.. angst but hope for a happy ending for most of your fic too.

Keep it coming

Hmm, yes you do like that type of plot huh? Arrange marriages and unwilling characters. oh well, I do supose that it fights in with how they would be expected to get along. Oh one thing, are you going to make the oh so predictable choice of making Sango a maid that Kagome can confide in? Can't you make her another lady whom was sent to help her prepare for the weding, like sort of a hand maid or something? Sango's always a servant. I like the fic (i think it was prisoner if i remember correctly) where she gets angry at Kagome and attacks (?) her. It was sort of unexpected, in that everyone knows them as friends and would expect Sango to forgive Kagome for being Naraku's daughter. I like surprises, and your writing can hardly be called predictable, since you always take fresh ideas and make it into a nice interesting fic, a fic which has aplot unlike any other on fanfic or (that i ever encountered anyway!)

Oh, And I do like this fic. Brand new plot! Wowwie!

I REALLY LIKE YOUR WRITING...THIS IS VERY DESCRIPTIVE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

JA!

sAIYUNA-SAN

sounds great! Please write more soon!

Wowza! As usual, of course.

You make me want to run out and read the story by Nozhazuma. However, I've decided to be patient and wait for you to complete this little piece, for fear of spoiling myself.

Of course, the most perfect moment was in his mother's room, where they both conceded that they would try.

One mistake you didn't find in editing was near the end of the chapter - after Sango told Kagome about the luncheon and bath, you slipped into third person and had "Kagome" growl in frustration.

wow another orginal story and i'm so happy u r going to continue breath in pages

can't wait for the next chappie

I like this fic so far. Can't wait to read more. Plz update soon.