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Althea Lynn chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 And this is how the conversation would go: Chihiro: Mom, Dad, can he stay here? He's my friend frrom the Spi- I mean he's my friend from school and- Her Dad: No! I will not let a boy stay in this house... something might happen. Chihiro: *rolls eyes* Mom, can he stay in the guest room? His parents died in a car accident and he has no where to go. *crocodile tears* Please. *puppy face* Her Mom: Ugh fine he can stay. Let me convince your father. |
Luxullia chapter 1 . 2/24/2010 I like the story. I'm waiting for the next chapter! |
DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 1/2/2010 Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP! |
phangirl17 chapter 1 . 5/26/2008 Aww... It's so cute. |
White Winged Angel 13 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007 Aw that was so cute ya need to do another fan fic about them! |
Lately chapter 1 . 8/25/2006 Yay confessions! Bravo! |
aquadreamz chapter 1 . 3/29/2006 I really liked this story! If you extend it and make it longer, i think it could go far! Hope yo see more! |
Dormantly banjkazfan chapter 1 . 2/3/2006 Aww! So sweet! I was almost expecting a letter correspondence fic between them, but I liked this! Great job! |
jessicanimaniac chapter 1 . 1/17/2006 It was good, but I think it was a bit ooc, chihiro especially. and how owuld she kep in touch with someone from the spirit world? I hope this isn't coming across as a flame, its not meant to be, I just think that if you made it longer, with more details it would be better. An idea: maybe it oculd e rush hour or something at the resturant, and she keeps catching glimpses of him as he's waiting to get in. And something I noticed with a lot of these fanfictions, thay introduce characters, than don't expand on them at all. The teacher, in your case. I think oyu could even take that whole scene out and still leave the story intact. It was a bit fast paced, too. I repeat: THIS IS NOT A FLAME. IT IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM, MEANT TO IMPROVE YOUR STORY. |
Natsu Hana chapter 1 . 12/16/2005 Oh, I hope you do another chapter. Please think about it. I think it has the potential to go on another few chapters or so. |
BlueFox of the Moon chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Oh my gosh how kawaii! Your SO right Haku and Chihiro make SUCH a cute couple. Please don't let that be it! Please, please write more! Haku and Chihiro 4eva!Ja ne! |
InuObsessed o.o chapter 1 . 5/16/2005 oh update! that was really good! Spirited Away is one of my TOP TEN fav. movies! i watched it like 10 tens.. and my sister got mad.. -_-' anyway, please update! cant wait! ] |
StarFire chapter 1 . 12/28/2003 You're right, Chihiro and Haku 4eva! That was a very good story, THAT BETTER NOT BE IT THOUGH! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE *5 hours later* MORE MORE MORE MORE... *breathes real heavy* Ok, I'll stop now. PLEASE KEEP GOING! ) |
The Great Susinko chapter 1 . 8/20/2003 I really liked your story. It was rather short though. I would love to hear how things go. |
Silver Fang11 chapter 1 . 8/17/2003 Very Kawaii! I like. Its very, soft and touching. Not to mention all around cute _ Yes I agree Haku and Chihiro are a cute couple *whine* I would love to go to the Spirit world myself, I would be all over Haku in an instant! _ Very good fic, I like it alot! Good Job! |