  nemo
1/12/04 . chapter 1 All of your storys are so...depressing! Really, I suppose that means you are a good writer but I always get terrible moodswings after I read one of them.
To be honest, I don't think any relationship between Draco and Harry would work out, either, but shouldm't you try out something happy or humourous or something just plain ridiculous just for the fun of it?
I think it's kind of a challange to try something new^.^
Anyway, back to this story; I think this is one of the most realistic ways of a Harry/Draco-pairing. It's somewhat strange, that, while most of J.K.Rowlings characters are portrait so 3-dimensional and human, Draco stays flat and one-sided as some spoiled hated and hating brat. This is even more curious, because he takes such a big role in Harrys life. Still, some of his behaviour just doesn't add up this way; but the only glimpse inside of him was, in my opinion, at the end of book 5.
I don't think that Draco would act like in your storys, I first thought that's what makes me think of your story as special, but it's the insight in the relationship between the two enemys that is making the characters real and gives them depth (at least for me^.^).
I also liked it, that you showed Harrys problems with relationships in "Perfect Potter" (Yes, this is an all-around-review, in case you didn't notice^.^). I don't think he isn't capable of having working relationships with other people but he keeps too much to himself - and there are much things he can't share with others even if he wanted to - because what happens to him seperates him more and more from a normal life. Still, there are people how'd really understand - like Neville Longbottom. Harry isolates himself with this no-one-understands-me feeling like he's used to from home, I suppose...
And I'm rambling here *looks ashamed*
Anyway, what this all is supposed to mean is; Your storys are great and though they depress me I don't regret having read them^.^
Bye, Kira |
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