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dreamcloud776 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005 Sorry, but this chain letter is for real. When Anne Wichert got it for the first time, she ignored it and a week later the love of her life dumped her for no good reason so BEWARE, and just send the stupid letter! The Lovers of the Heart In order to form a more perfect kiss, enable the mighty hug to promote to whom we please but one kiss Article 1: Statement of Love: The Kiss 1. Kiss on the hand I adore you 2. Kiss on the cheek I just want to be friends 3. Kiss on the neck I want you 4. Kiss on the lips I love you 5. Kiss on the ears I am just playing 6. Kiss anywhere else lets not get carried away 7. Look in your eyes kiss me 8. Playing with your hair I can't live without you 9. Hand on your waist I love you to much to let you go Article 2: The Three Steps 1. Girls: If any guys gets fresh with you, slap him. 2. Guys If any girl slaps you, her intentions are still good. 3. Guys & Girls Close your eyes when kissing, it is rude to stare. Article 3: The Commandments 1. Thou shall not squeeze too hard. 2. Thou shall not ask for a kiss, but take one. 3. Thou shall kiss at every opportunity. * Remember * A peach is a peach A plum is a plum, A kiss isn't a kiss Without some tongue. So open up your mouth close your eyes, and give your tongue some exercise! Here are a few reasons why guys like girls: 1. They will always smell good even if its just shampoo 2. The way their heads always find the right spot on our shoulder 3. How cute they look when they sleep 4. The ease in which they fit into our arms 5. The way they kiss you and all of a sudden everything is right in the world 6. How cute they are when they eat 7. The way they take hours to get dressed but in the end it makes it all worth while 8. Because they are always warm even when its minus 30 outside 9. The way they look good no matter what they wear 10. The way they fish for compliments even though you both know that you think she's the most beautiful thing on this earth 11. How cute they are when they argue 12. The way her hand always finds yours 13. The way they smile 14. The way you feel when you see their name on the caller ID after you just had a big fight 15. The way she says "lets not fight anymore" even though you know that an hour later... 16. The way they kiss when you do something nice for them 17. The way they kiss you when you say "I love you" 18. Actually ... just the way they kiss you... 19. The way they fall into your arms when they cry 20. Then the way they apologize for crying over something that silly 21. The way they hit you and expect it to hurt 22. Then the way they apologize when it does hurt. (even though we don't admit it)! 23. The way they say "I miss you" 24. The way you miss them 25. The way their tears make you want to change the world so that it doesn't hurt her anymore... Yet regardless if you love them, hate them, wish they would die or know that you would die without them ... it matters not. Because once in your life, whatever they were to the world they become everything to you. When you look them in the eyes, traveling to the depths of their souls and you say a million things without trace of a sound, you know that yo ur own life is inevitable consumed within the rhythmic beatings of her very heart. We love them for a million reasons, No paper would do it justice. It is a thing not of the mind but of the heart. A feeling. Only felt. * This chain started in 1997. It is a love chain letter. In an hour you are supposed to send it to 25 people. It is easy, just look into chat rooms and find them. Anyway, send it to 25 people in 1 hour. Now here comes the fun part. You then say the name of the person you like or love and then the person will say "I love you," or "Will you go out with me?" NO JOKE! NOW THE CONSEQUENCES The consequences are: If you break the chain letter, you will have bad luck in future relationships. If you don't break the chain, then you will be a happy camper! CoNgRatULaTioNs! You have been chosen to participate in the LONGEST and the LUCKIEST chain letter on the Internet! Once you read, this letter you must IMMEDIATELY (meaning within the hour) be sent to 6 people After you send it, make a wish and it will come TRUE YOU MAY NOT WAIT FOR A CERTAIN TIME TO SEND IT... REMEMBER, IT MUST BE SENT TO 25 PEOPLE WITHIN 1 HOUR, OR YOUR WISH WILL NOT COME TRUE! If THIS CHAIN LETTER IS CONTINUED UNTIL THE YEAR 2004, IT WILL BE PLACED IN THE GUINNESS BOOK OF WORLD RECORDS! PLEASE CONTINUE IT NOW! *WARNING* IF YOU DO NOT PASS THIS ON, SOMETHING BAD OR WORSE WILL HAPPEN TO YOU: NOTE* THE MORE PEOPLE YOU SEND THIS TO THE MORE LUCK YOU WILL HAVE IN YOUR LOVE LIFE. IF YOU BREAK THE CHAIN LETTER (IT HAS BEEN GOING SINCE 20) YOU WILL still HAVE good LUCK WITH YOUR LOVE LIFE FOR SEVEN YEARS. THIS IS NO JOKE. GOOD LUCK! |
QueenTatooine chapter 1 . 6/17/2005 I think this is well done, very nice and it fits I think with the characters. Good job. ~QueenTatooine |
Gabi chapter 1 . 5/5/2005 This was a great start! I, too, have seen this relationship between Gusto and Sunni (especially in the episode with the mermaid!). I like the spin you've taken on it. Let's try for more! |
Rosefire chapter 1 . 4/21/2005 I'd always thought Sunni and Gusto would be cute. I could never tell how old Gusto might be, but it seemed that he and Sunni were close in age. Oh well It's a very sweet story and I liked it alot. |
GalitMirav chapter 1 . 6/28/2004 This was very good. I love how you explored young Sunni's crush on Gusto. Very well written. |
Grima chapter 1 . 6/9/2004 Man, I hate reality checks. Not bad, just too reminecent of real life for my own taste. Man, now I'm in a bad funk... |
Hotaru Aino chapter 1 . 12/15/2003 O.o Okay I know that I always complain that when I write a drabble it hate doing it, cause it never quite has enough to it... but this was really good. I never expected it to make me want to cry... |
Red Tale chapter 1 . 10/27/2003 I'm not sure, but that might be the shortest thing to ever affect me so profoundly. The dialog was well done too. |
Maijax chapter 1 . 10/18/2003 Wow this is potent stuff. I feel for poor Sunni. I lover your style of writing and hope to see more in the future. |
The Unknower01 chapter 1 . 10/9/2003 AW, CUTE! Plz update soon! I wanna know whatta happen next! |
This Ruined Puzzle chapter 1 . 9/8/2003 This could be a GREAT start to a story or something. |
Thundercub chapter 1 . 9/1/2003 That was powerful, considering how short it was! Keep it up. |