 SkyChasingDreamer 1/5/11 . chapter 13Greetings love!
Sooooooooo, lately I've been reading a lot more than I've been writing *smiles sheepishly* and my want for reading brought me to one of my favorite ff dot net authoress' favorites. She has over a hundred and I've been systematically going from number one to number one hundred and something.
During my rather overwhelming adventure, I came across your story. I'm a huge fan of classical music and have recently discovered that the rendition of 'Bolero' at the end credits of the movie Moulin Rouge is absolutely breathtaking.
Anyway, I enjoyed this fic. Particularly the classical music part. I've always been a fan of Vanessa Mae (she blows me away every single time I hear her play 'Devil's Trill') so it was good to see her get some lovin'. Electric violin is absolute genius. I loved the name Little Mischief, by the way. I smiled every time it came up lol
The plot line was good, but I think you could have taken a little more time developing the characters. Don't get me wrong, this isn't a flame by any means! Just something to keep in mind for the stuff you write in the future. The plot was well thought out and everything, but maybe next time you could take just a little more time adding details about their friendship (Draco and Harry's) before they get together as a couple, if that makes sense. If you're confused at all just PM me and I'll explain better. Rutty exams have got me all and jumbled haha
Anyway, to the point, I enjoyed this fic. It was a good read and perhaps next time you could draw out the sex scenes. Plenty of people out there are smut whores, including myself.
Alright, I think this thing has gotten long enough and you're probably ready for it to end.
So, I bid you ado and luck for the future!
Cheerio!
~the dreamer |
 wackadoodle 12/9/10 . chapter 13this is an amazing story. i like how you managed to put it into a different setting than Hogwarts but you didnt try to incorporate to much of it, like the houses for instance, for i find that too cliche. and i like how you fitted classical music in, because i have recently gotten iterested in it and you suggested some really good ones that really go with that certain piece of the story. well done =) |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 6Their first kiss, so sweet. I'm happy Narcissa didn't freak out and is happy for her son instead. |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 5Awww, they are together. I'm worried from your AN that they might not be next chapter. I must run to find out. |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 4Yep, we all say things we don't mean, drunk or not. Or maybe we do mean them, we just shouldn't say them.
I'm glad Blaise made Draco see sense and tell him to get the balls to do something about it. |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 3Yes, Hermione and Ron are together. I wondered if Ron would get a clue.
Now... let's see if Draco can show himself without scaring Harry off. |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 2Awww, them sleeping together was cute. Now to get all the right people together, haha... |
 Ealasaid77 12/5/10 . chapter 1Interesting HP/DM slash going on here. I'm used to them still being all magic and stuff. It's nice. |
 dtav 11/28/10 . chapter 2Nicely done! I love a blushing Ron. And the Harry/Draco scene on the couch was super sweet! |
 dtav 11/28/10 . chapter 1Great story! I loved the setting and the dynamics of all the relationships. Can't wait to read some more! |
 scorpionika 11/5/10 . chapter 13amazing, sweet, fluffy yet realistic, positively *magical* story ^_^
thank you for it, it made three days of my life :P
hugs! |
 MissMeowFace 10/20/10 . chapter 13Oh My God this story is amazing!
i usually stay well away from non-magical AUs, i usually dont enjoy them at all. But this...this was something else.
I love the way you write, ive never read fiction quite like this. And that sex scene was absolutely gorgeous. It was hot, yet oh so loving and sophisticated. One of my favouorite scenes was the concert at the end, when Draco finally 'plays', that was beautiful.
I also love the charactersization in this. I like the way that the while they retain their original character, they have changed slightly to fit in with the story. I dont know if you meant to do that, and i hope i havent offended you, but i thought it was great lol!
I really hope you finish the sequel soon - I refuse to let myself read unfinished stories - i get to impatient lol!
Thankyou for this story, you're amazing! :D |
 Lobster3 10/15/10 . chapter 5I couldn't believe it when you started talking about tape. I remember listening to it when I was really young and for years I have been thinking about it, wondering what happened to it and what it was called. Thank you for finally answering what I have wondered for years |
 PhoenixPixie 9/28/10 . chapter 13*clap clap clap* I've never loved an AU story more! |
 PhoenixPixie 9/28/10 . chapter 10perfect... |