 SiriusWolf 10/24/04 . chapter 11Oh Shit! That is going to be one highly explosive relationship. Snape being his gaurdian! I'd rather have Lupin, and that's saying something, since Harry wouldn't have enough protection on a full moon. I'd rather have him being a werewolf than in the care of that creep. Of course, now you have a decision to make, you can keep the vile attitude or you can have Snape try to make amends. Harry won't, not unless Snape apoligizes. |
 BillyRayValentine 9/28/04 . chapter 11I have to go, so I'll just say...GOOD JOB |
 TeenTitansGirl14 8/6/04 . chapter 11I like this already!
Good plot! A bit rushed and it could need more description and a bit of smoothing out but I like where it's going!
More Parseltongue please! That would be fantabulous! ^_^
*click Author Alert button* |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 11::lost and confused::
Why Snape? Please let me just kill the greasy git and put him and evryone else out of our misery. He'd really be better off dead I tell you. |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 10O_o;;
Incurable? NO! NOT MY HARRY!
ahem... good job!
Some parts were confusing. I didn't know what was happening sometimes. Otherwise excellent. Good plot. Good fic! ^_^ |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 6Did he rape her? Or did she kick the shit outta him before it could happen?
^_^;; |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 5Ah! That last bit about the dream was inspired! But I missed something... How'd everyone find out who Harry is? |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 4WOW! I love Ginny! Lol! This had better be a Harry and Ginny ship! ^_^
LOL! Nice job!
Can I kill Snape?
Pretty please! ;) |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 3Okay... Lol. I don't know what I was going on about in my last review about the codes but the rest of what I said was pretty accurate. Your trying to make the letters secretive yet they reveal so much. Death Eaters could've set up an ambush had anyone intercepted the letter that said when Harry would be picked up. Also sending Snape to pick up Harry isn't a very good idea considering how much they hate each other and that he's playing double agent so being seen at #4 Privet Drive isn't a good idea. Well I know this is in a review for chapter 3 but I forgot to put it in my review for chapter 2.
Please don't take these as flames. they're just afew things I thought you should be aware of.
^_^ You are a good writer. Don't let anyone or anything (even my dumb reviews) discourage you. ;)
Keep up the good work! Now... I'm off to read chapter 3. ^^;; |
 MrsSakuraPotter 3/16/04 . chapter 2Hey! I don't really have any complaint so far. Well okay, I do have one...
In your letters you have sort of a code going on but the letter would still tell anyone who intercepted it quite alot.
Hmm...
May I suggest that they write short cryptic messages to each other? Because if you put the entire thing in code it would be bothersome for the reader to look up and unscramble it.
Don't take this as a flame. I know how hard it is to write and I think you are doing a really good job! |
 Aqua Mage 3/12/04 . chapter 11Great fic. Please keep writing, I can't wait to hear the end! |
 HELEN 2/29/04 . chapter 7 i LIKE URE SENSE OF HUMOR AND SUSPENSE. |
 Jenheidi 2/28/04 . chapter 10 I like the chapter titles! They are flashy./* |
 Being Irish 2/25/04 . chapter 11Being Irish... ohh! People are going to curse and hex and stuff! Run away! |
 Being Irish 2/25/04 . chapter 7Being Irish... wickedified! I like the ending!
He's paranoid! No! |